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Ok so just so everyone knows...this isn't a band fanfic. We just made up guys based off of different people from different bands.
Chapter One “Why can’t I be more like you, Sophia?” I asked as we walked away from the baseball diamond made up of trashcans and all sorts of junk. “What are you talking about?” Sophia laughed. “Why can’t people say to me ‘Strike this loser out Sophia!’ or ‘Hit a Home Run!’? Every time it’s my turn to bat, everyone groans.” I said, pouting at the end of my sob story to add “dramatic effect”. “You just need more practice. I promise we’ll work on it more. Besides, why would you want to be like me? You’re smart and are probably going to be more successful then I will ever be. All I got is ‘spunk’ as my dad puts it.” Sophia said. It seems like everyone wants to be what they’re not. People with curly hair want straight hair. People with straight hair want curly hair. People like me want to be like Sophia. People like Sophia want to be like me. “Well…maybe since you’re going to help me with baseball…I could tutor you or something.” I suggested. Sophia grinned at me. “Really? That’d be great. But let’s stop talking about this now. My mom’s making Lasagna tonight…you wanna come over?” She asked. “Ya sure.” I don’t even have to ask my parents if I can go to her house anymore. I practically live there. But it also helps living in the same apartment right next to your best friend. Oh, you probably have a few questions, right? Who am I? My name is Sarah. Brown hair, brown eyes… the usual. My best friend is Sophia, obviously. She’s the kind of person I want to be. Outgoing, funny, athletic, charismatic and so many other things to list. We live in the poor part of NYC, but we’re proud. We’re small but mighty. It’s the kind of neighborhood where everyone knows everyone. Usually after school, all of our friends make up a baseball diamond in the middle of the road and we play there for hours on end. But it was the last day of school and summers meant Central Park and the Café for Sophia and me. Sophia and I have lived in the same apartment ever since I moved here in second grade. Everyday is the same, everyone is the same, and everything is the same. It’s normal here in NYC. This message has been edited. Last edited by: Tino Väinämöinen, |
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I like it!
--- The name's Laura, feel free to talk to me whenever, I don't bite! Music is life, live it loud. |
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Thank you
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Anyone else gonna comment?
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I love all the support guys
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COMMENT, DAMNIT.
ATL CULT MEMBER: Jack's Indian Superhero |
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yay thank you!! two readers oh yes...anyway update coming up soon. Maybe one more person can comment?
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I didn't see this was updated until now.
Update, please? --- The name's Laura, feel free to talk to me whenever, I don't bite! Music is life, live it loud. |
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Chapter 3
The best part of summer is definitely the park. The park has always been the place where Sarah and me go to if we need to talk about something, cry about something or just relax and have fun with life. The first time my dad yelled at me about my grades and ‘What I planned to do with my life’, I ran next door to Sarah’s and told her to meet me at the park. After talking there, I felt so much better. When Sarah’s dog died, we both ran here and I just let her cry for hours and hours. Today, we were at the park just to be kids. I mean, it was the first day of summer. “You know, my cousin’s having a party tonight.” I said while Sarah and I were on the teeter-totter. “Which cousin? The one that was arrested for murder or the one that’s 21, a musician and really cool?” She asked. For a smart person, Sarah could be really dumb. “Oh well obviously the one that is arrested.” I smirked. Sarah rolled her eyes. “Don’t get smart with me.” She pointed her finger threateningly. “That’s my job though! Anyway, you want to go?” I asked, as I was in mid-air. “I don’t know. Aren’t there older people and drinking…and other gross stuff that 15 and 16 year olds aren’t supposed to see?” She asked. I stopped the teeter-totter as I hit the ground. “Come on Sarah! Just one night, let’s live a little.” I begged. I’m not one to beg, but this called for some begging. “I don’t know…” Sarah said, avoiding eye contact with me. “Please?” I said giving her my best puppy dog look. She hesitantly looked at my face and laughed. “All right, but you owe me big time.” She smiled. I jumped up from my seat, ran over to Sarah and hugged her. “This is going to be so exciting, but we need to be smart. There are some creepy people out there, especially the ones above the age of 18.” ~~ “I-I can’t do this Soph.” Sarah said pulling her coat over herself. “Come on! You look beautiful! Just remember…stick together ok?” I said slowly as if Sarah was a small kindergartner. She nodded her head and I pulled her up the steps to the big black front door. I knocked once and waited five seconds before my cousin answered the door. “Soph!” He grinned as I pulled him into a big bear hug. “Tony, you don’t mind us coming to this party right?” I asked. “Oh ya it’s totally cool. Come on in.” He led the two of us into the dark building with bright dance lights, a “punch” table, smoke from the numerous joints from the people sitting on the couches, and a great live band. |
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