aw thats sweet I can pick out members of the band ! so anyways update!

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Originally posted by CHA!NSAW:
-coughsatinobviousfangirl-

oh yes.

there was something I made for you quite a while ago, Celeste.

Ignore the unfinished lines and disproportioned bodies. I was planning on going into crazy detail and drawing to whole picutre. Alas, I am the worst kind of procrationator/improvisor and just drew contour, didn't bother revising, and used photoshop instead.

Eh. I think it's hideous.



HERE YA GO ANYWAY.

EEEEEEE! I <3 IT!

THANKYOOOOOOU!

"Darkness descending
Darkness and fate
You'll scream for help
But you'll be too late."



Jon picked Jenni up by the waist and placed her on a safe part of the hallway floor. He then reached with his legs and crossed safely past the gaping hole. The two turned and looked at each other, then grabbed the other's hand and ran downstairs. They quickly bypassed the rest of the group and headed for the front door.

"Where are you going?" asked Ryan with an inquisitive stare. "Don't you want any s'mores?"

"S'mores?" Jon replied, looking at Ryan as he reached for the door handle. "How can you think of food when there's a ghost in this house?"

"Fere's a ghoft in fer?" Kii exclaimed through muffled words. She covered her mouth to keep the s'more inside as she talked. "If vhat what attacfed Celeste?!"

"Yes, and it attacked Jenni and I," he answered, turning the door handle. "Didn't you hear the noise in the kitchen?"

"What noise?" asked Brendon. "There wasn't any noise."

"The floor fell through upstairs!" Jenni screamed. "It f***ing fell through with Jon and I standing right there!"

"On second thought, I'll pass on the s'mores and follow Jenni and Jon," Chaynee said, dropping her plate onto the coffee table. "I... um... really miss home."

"Oh s***..." whispered Jon.

The rest of the group watched as he continuously tried to get the door to unlock. No matter how many times he tried, the door would not budge from its place in the wall. Worried, he stepped over to the window and tried to pull it open. It was the same story. None of the exits would open. They were trapped.

"Does anyone else smell that?" Ryan asked, standing up and sniffing the air.

A light smoke began pouring from underneath the front section of the house. Before the group could react, it was already filling the floor and moving upwards towards the ceiling. They all quickly ran for the back of the house only to discover that it was coming from there as well. Terrified and confused, they decided to hide in the kitchen where they would have the best chance of defending themselves if something tried to attack them. But upon reaching the kitchen Jenni noticed something odd. She looked at the ceiling and it was completely intact. She looked at the counter top, hoping to see some debris. It was completely clean. Spotless as if it had just been washed.

"Jon, I'm scared," she whispered, holding back her tears as she reached for a knife in one of the drawers. "I don't want to fight."

"You won't have to, we'll protect you," he whispered back, pushing her into one of the cabinets. "Stay in there."

"Do you see anything?" Brendon asked Ryan. He had already grabbed ahold of a cast iron pan and was waiting at the doorway to smash anyone that tried to enter.

"Nothing yet," he replied, motioning Chaynee to stay down behind the counter. "But what puzzles me is that it doesn't look foggy outside."

Meanwhile Spencer was having his own problems with Celeste upstairs. The exact moment that the floor had burst in she began repeating a phrase in French over and over again. He had tried to get her to snap out of whatever daze she had gone into, but his efforts were useless.

"Vous n'existez pas. Vous n'existez pas. Vous n'existez pas. Vous n'existez pas," she whispered as her eyes became wider by the second.

"Celeste, snap out of it!" Spencer screamed, violently shaking her by the shoulders. "Please just stop this!"

"Vous n'existez pas. Vous n'existez pas. Vous n'existez pas. Vous n'existez pas," she continued, turning her eyes towards him. Soon the color began to drain from them. First, her pupils became wider-so wide that the entire eye seemed to be black-, then the black burst into bright white and she screamed as if something was grabbing ahold of her. Her words became frantic as a shadow formed behind Spencer and slowly took on the shape of a woman. Celeste raised her hand and pointed behind him. "Vous n'existez pas! Vous n'existez pas! Vous n'existez pas!"

"What?" he turned around and stared at the girl that was behind him with a maniacal smile on her face. He glared at her and growled, "I don't care what you are. Let her go or I'll-"

"You'll do what?" asked the girl as she reached through him like a vaporous being and grabbed Celeste's hand. "It's time to go now."

"Vous n'existez pas..." she whispered weakly back.

The lights in the house flickered vicariously and the smoke trickled past every crack in the walls as the foundation of the lake house shook beneath those inside its walls. Within moments the house had come to a complete stop and those in the kitchen stood up and looked around with smiles on their faces.

"Do you have the pancake mix, Jon?" Brendon asked, setting the cast iron pan in his hand on the stove.

"Oh yes, let me get it," he answered, reaching into the cabinet where Jenni had previously been. It was now empty save for the few grocery items that had been stored away. "You know, making breakfast for dinner was a very good idea."

"Well, you'll have to thank Chaynee," he chuckled. "She did bring the groceries after all."

"Say no more," Chaynee said, ruffling his hair. "It was the best thing to do for my BrennyBear."

"Sorry I'm late," Spencer smirked, skipping into the room and holding out a small box. "I was just getting a little present for Kii."

"A present for me, hon?" she smiled, hugging him around the neck. "Oh, you shouldn't have!"



(Pardon my horrible French. I used Babelfish. XD)

what exactly does that mean and what the hell just happened can you like give me a summary or something

It means, "You do not exist."

Also, some of the group were just kidnapped and the others have no memory of this.

Reality has been rearranged.

wheeeeeeeeeeee.

trapped in the writing, by god.

I don't know what's going on but it's exciting.

I love how everyone acts as if nothing happened.

i'm almost certain it's not by thier own will. spencer and I seem...

bahahaha.

CHANGED REALITY.

freaky funky and strange.

i love it so much.

^_^

And it will get crazier.

Ah, writing... I love thee so.

That was certainly eerie

Says the one with the vampire Brendon avatar... ^_^

I take it as a compliment.

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A new one will probably come tomorrow.

yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! fo shizzle!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! mesa heart heart you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i approve! i just hope my character doesn't die hahah

i definately like the way you write

I really like this story =D Its amazing!

coolz update