typical.

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Originally posted by shannzy-white doe:
typical.

yeah, well, what ya gonna do? *shrugs*

anyway...... UPDATE TIME!

Brendon's Bit:
I knew Ryan would do this. He is far too determined to create the most powerful weapon, a perfect werewolf, which would be the strongest one like, ever.
He thinks he can use Taz, but he underestimates her power. He has no idea how POWERFUL she can be.
Beware ryan.... Know your limits.

Ryan's Bit:
I was still laughing 5 minutes later, but all of a sudden she stood up! I was enraged! 'Don't let her escape! I will not make the same mistake again!'
My hooded minions(minus Shannzy) piled themselves on top of her, but she was strong enough to throw them all off! Where had this sudden strength come from?!... I looked at the other 3, standing perfectly still with shock on their faces, all except Brendon who was smirking. I bet he had something to do with this. I let out a low hissing noise, like an enraged cat at them, and turned back around to find that she had escaped into the trees!
One hooded man began to beg for mercy... 'I do not ecept mistakes made by you lot, that cause my plans to fail!'
He kneeled infront of me whinning 'Please master! I'm sorry! Please forgive me!'
'You were always useless Leto! I should never have stopped Pete killing you!' I pulled down his hood...

Jon's Bit:
Ryan was acting so strange....Then when he pulled down the hood of his minion, I couldn't believe my eyes....It was Jared! As far as we all knew he was killed by Pete... But, judging by Brendon's expression I think HE may have. This was impossible, yet too true. I just couldn't believe my eyes....

Shannzy's Bit:
I look down on Jared. Always have. Always will. I hate him. He's such a suck up to my master. I wish Pete HAD finished him. Instead he was told by Pete to run and NEVER return, as this would spoil his story, and he needed to go finish off Panic.
He sent me to stop Taz and when I failed he had to change his story and he was VERY unhappy with me. He banished me forever...I wandered for days with no food or shelter, that's when Ryan found me and took me in, then explained that Taz had killed my master. he cared for me and I grew VERY attached to him...Jared just invades MINE and MY master's space. I hope he dies very horribly....

Jared's Bit:
I'm going to die...I know it. Ryan's fangs are unusually large, that must mean he's enraged...He wants me dead... Come to think of it, all his teeth are huge...
'Ah!' He picked me up by my shirt collar...

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OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*SCREAMS* NYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

HOLY CHRIST HOLY CHRIST HOLY CHRIST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

...and moved towards my throat, his jaws widening like...NOTHING I'd ever seen before!...Closer, closer... Then I felt a grave pain and then all i knew was pitch black...

Ryan's Bit:
I dropped Jared's body to the ground. His blood didn't taste that good to be honest, but there are more pressing matters.
That poison spreading through Taz will soon take it's full effect...If we don't catch her....'Shannzy!...'
She ran to my side. 'Yes master?'
'It's all up to you now. Catch Taz...Here' I handed her some rope.
'What's this for? it won't be strong enough will it?'
'It's a special kind of rope. Tie it around her ankles and her wrists. Everytime she dissobeys it will emit an electic shock... Once you have her, bring here to me ALIVE.'
'Yes master.' She ran deep into the woods in pursuit of Taz....I must have her in my clutches...Only then will everything go acording to plan....

Taz's Bit:
(I love this bit =])
Where am I? What happened? I'm following paw prints out the woods....All my clothes are torn and hanging off me...I can only see in black and white....My hands are stained with blood...it smells so good....What the hell happeed? Am I turning into an animal?
I had a flashback, it was very quick but i saw everything....
I was happy. I was smilling, and then Ed Minton appeared behind me without my noticing. he brought his head towards my neck, opened his mouth to reveal large white fangs...Then, he sunk them deep into my neck....
I realised I had just had a flashback of the day I became part Dandy... I never remembered anything, that's why I thought it was brendon who had 'turned' me....
(Ed Minton's teeth are always sparkling white, I mearly stated a fact, and he does have fairly large fangs)

Shannzy's Bit:
I will do this, for my master!
I see her! there, heading out the woods...YUCK! I just stood in something sticky.... Oh, it's a blood Stained pawprint...
Is that her house? Perhaps i'll just wait here. this could get messy...

Later That Night...
God i'm bored! Wait, there she is!
She's seen me... Shit! I need to run! She's coming straight for me....Crap she's transformed! I am really screwed now!... 'Come on legs! Move faster!'

I turned my head around...'What?! She's gone!....wait a second....' I looked up.... Oh...Shit.... I had no choice...I fired my gun...
Her body fell from the tree. She was still alive, that i knew, because I have no silver bullets...Besides with her strength I don't think it would've worked... But, I didseriously wound her with the shot...

'I...I'm bleeding!' She tried to get up...
'I have disgraced myself...I have dissobeyed my orders...I wasn't meant to shoot you... Ryan will surely want to kill me now....'
She sat up, 'What will you do?'
'Run, far away from here...I sujest you do the same.... here, take my cloke. It may hide your identity for a while... Not long, but enough time to find some help, and a place to hide...'
She took my cloke from my outstretched arms...'Th..Thank you shannzy... I won't forget this act of kindness, no matter how cowardly it may be.'
She threw my cloke over herself and ran for the city. I headed far to the west, to the mountains.... I hope he won't find me... or her...


In the next update....
We follow Taz to the city where she runs into a familiar face, though she does not welcome this meeting...and then another familliar face shows up but this one is even more unwelcome...

thats so sweeeeeeeeeeeeaaat!

more!

In The City....
(Ed's Bit)

'Hey Ed look...I just saw a beautiful creature walking by.'
'Huh? What? Sorry ALex I was in a daydream.'
'That girl...That beutiful creature...She's bleeding'
'Huh?'
'I can smell blood. that's what's 'huh'...' he sniffed the air.
She turned around, gasped, then pulled her hood up.
'She's seen us. Dang. she's running!'
'Oh no....She couldn't be....It can't be her! Hey! Wait!'
She began to ran faster, 'STAY AWAY ED! I HATE YOU!!'
'She knows you?!' asked Alex,
I sighed. 'Years ago I saw her standing there. Smilling, happy. her smell was so heavenly, I couldn't help myself...Her blood was SO sweet. That's all I remember. Since that day her life has never been the same, so she hates me for it.'
he looked shocked. 'Really? Wow... HEY YOU! PUT HER DOWN!' He began to run towards her,
'What?....HEY!....' I ran too. The hooded figure bending down with her in his arms grinned, blood dripping from his teeth. Then, before I knew it he was gone. He ran so fast he was just a blur... I have to get her back!
......

Ryan's Bit:
She stirred...'you're finaly awake...'
She groaned and sat up, 'My...My neck hurts...'
I grinned, 'You were bleeding. It smelt so good, so I had a little taste.'
'Why you-!' She noticed the chains around her ankles and her wrists, 'Hey! No fair! Where the hell am I?!'
'In a cell, in my secret den.'
'WHAT?!'
I laughed and stood up, 'I can't let you run wild with that poison running through you...You'd go insane. As it is, I believe You've been out killing most nights....'
'K...K...Killing?!' the words stuck in her throat,
'Oh yes. You've got blood stained hands...' I peeked round at them. She tried to hide them, but I could still see.
'Now, i'm going to leave you locked in here for a while. I don't want you running around every night.' I winked at her. 'You know...You really are quite beautiful...' I grabbed her chin, she didn't like this. She spat in my face and growled. I threw her to the floor. 'You need to learn some respect! You can stay locked in here untill you do!' I stormed out, slamming the door behind me... leaving her in there. Lets see how she does without food, water and light for a few days....

......

Woah I had totally forgotten about this story!
Well I finished the other one, and I have to say, Great ending! :]

Now the sequel, awesome start! I can't wait to see what happens next!

And evil Ryhoe! GAH!

OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!



O_O

I need to write more. i'll give you all i have right now.

Taz's bit:
I felt like I was locked in a cage. It was pitch black, except for a very small amount of light that pushed it's way through cracks in the walls. I sat in one corner, humming to myself, I think i'm going insane, locked in this prison...Suddenly a small flap oppened and a bowl of meat scraps(i'm not sure what kind) was pushed through....

being nagged again. back shortly for the rest of this update

...I couldn't help it. I was so hungry. I ,well, WOLFed it down. It slammed shut again with a loud bang, due to being made of such thick steel...

minutes passed, and I was still hungry. Then, I heard the sound of fighting outside... Then, the door flew open. I was blinded by light. A figure stood in the doorway... He had long black hair... 'E...Ed?'
He nodded and smilled through his shinning, white teeth. He picked me up and walked out the door again. When we were outside the cell, I saw the rest of Elliot Minor, Alex included, fighting the guards and Ryan's minions...
'Ed...'
He looked deep into my eyes, my stomach churned, 'Yes?'
'Ed... BEHIND YOU!'
he turned to see Ryan himself, lunging at him. he cradled me close to his chest and tried to jump aside, but it was too late... I was knocked out of his grip and thrown into a wall....
(k, trying to make it up from now on as that's all I have down on paper)
Ryan stood up and walked over to me, snarling. He lifted me up by my chin and I struggled against him, much to his dislike. He tightened his grip, I began to choke.... I managed to turn my head a small amount. It was enough.... I sunk my teeth deeply into his arm. He yelled and shook his arm trying to shake me off, but I kept my grip firm and held on.... He was really unhappy now.... he began to knock my head against the wall, the pain was horrible... As if I didn't have a headache already! The nerve!

....

okay.... I'm brain dead the now. Need to go think about the next bit.

Woah intense O_o
Nice job!

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Originally posted by яоск ρяііисєѕѕ:
Woah intense O_o
Nice job!

thanks! ^_^

*sings* LOOOOOOOVED IT!!!!


^_^

im not subrised your brain dead, he banged your head against the wall!

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Originally posted by shannzy-white doe:
im not subrised your brain dead, he banged your head against the wall!

huh? wazza? ouch! okiay, you is right