Found some chapters I wrote on my computer...
So i wrote some more and posted it on mibba.

read it here if you want:
http://www.mibba.com/story/x-Perfection/I-Know-I-Know-T...Somewhere-Out-There/

anyways, comments would be greatly apprecieated.

It all started last year. I met him on the First Day of school. I still remember how we met, as clear was water. Of course, I fell for him, and he fell back. We were like Romeo and Juillet, but their story didn't turn out perfect, and neither did mine.

He was sitting on the roof of his black Mercedes, wearing his sunglasses. Yes, he did look smoking hot, and yes a ton of girls were crowded around him. When the senior "popular" girl Lana walked by, she eyed him flirtningly, and he waved back. I knew that I had no change with him, I was a freshman, and I was basically looked down at. Who knew I would be wrong?

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This es goooood

I like it. Could I be in it???

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Originally posted by PanicMeetThePress915:
I like it. Could I be in it???

sure =] PM ME or IM me.

I'm sixteen, and it's my first day at Maryland High School. I just moved to Maryland by myself three weeks ago. My parents lived in New York, but I met two boys who convinced me to move to Maryland. Their names were Rick and Jack Barakat. Rick was in the same grade as me, and Jack was in grade twelve. They were damn good at convincing, and I had to give in to their puppy dog faces, and the fact that they're hot won't hurt one bit.

"Hey, and welcome to Maryland!" Rick said, jumping infront of me.
"Rick!" I screamed, and pulled him into a hug.
"So, you still living in New York?" Rick asked.
"No, silly! I moved here three weeks ago!" I said.
"So, like it here?" he asked.
"Gah, truthfully it's kinda boring, but I guess it's cause I don't know anyone yet." I said.
Suddenly, a pair of hands covered my eyes.
"Guess who?" A cute girly voice said behind me.
"Who?" I asked in a flity way.
"JACK!" He screamed and jumped infront of me, knocking Rick out of the way.
"GIMMIE SOME LOVE!" Jack yelled, hugging me.
I hugged him back, meanwhile smelling him. He smelled like Axe perfume, not too much, and not to little, just the perfect amount.
"MMM" I said smirking, "Someone smells good."
"Just for you, baby, just for you," Jack said, twitching his eyebrows.
"Flirty mc flirtyson." Rick said to jack.
"Don't hate me," Jack said and put his around my shoulder.
"I'll show you the way," He said.
I giggled and put my hand around his waist. I saw him blushed, and I blushed. He giggled and started walking.
"So, this is the parking lot!" He said, pointing around where we were standing.
"I figured, I see lots of cars" I said.
He laughed and pecked me on the cheek. He saw me blushed and smiled.
"Awe, cute." He said.
"Shut up," I murmured.
Then he led me to the boy who was sitting on his car. The girls around the boy turned around to face Jack, a lot of them blushing and trying to flirt with Jack.
"Het jack," A blonde girl said blushing.
"How was your summer?" A brunette asked.
"Oh, it was AMAZING!. I went to New York for a month, and met the most raddest person ever." Jack said, squeezing my shoulder.
I blushed, and Jack noticed it again, and giggled.
"Who's this lovely young cutie?" The boy said, hopping down from his har and coming towards us.
"Krystal, meet Alex. Alex, meet Krystal." Jack said.
"Hey, Christal," Alex said winking at me.
It I had no self control, I probably would have fainted right there.
"Hi,' I said blushing like mad.
He held out his hand to me.
"May I escort you to your class hunn?" He asked me.
I blushed more and took his hand.
"Yes you may," I said.
By that time, my cheeks were bright red.

cute. write more or suffer my whining

its short lol, sorry.


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---Alex POV---
Krystal. She was beautiful, and gorgeous. She was so cute, and she would blush everytime I talked, or looked at her. Sure, she was a freshman, but she had something I was in love with. I couldn't stop thinking about her through the weekend. Everytime my phone rang, I would run or rush to get it, hoping it was her. And when I texted her, I was the one who couldnt stop blushing.

---Krystal POV---
"Hey, wanna call Alex?" Jack Asked.
We were hanging out at Boston Pizza, eating a vegeterian pizza. Jack was sitting next to me, his hand around my shoulder. Rick was sitting scross the table from us, along with Zack and Rian, who were two boys in Jack and Alex's band.
"Yea, sure!" I said, and Jack started dialing his number.
"Heya handsome!" Alex said appearing in the booth.
"What are you doing here?" Jack asked.
"Rick told me to come, now move over!" Alex said.
Alex sat down next to me, and pushed Jacks arm off mine. Then he put his hand around my shoulder. I couldn't help but blush.
"Hey!" Jack said, glaring at Alex.
Alex just stuck out his tongue at Jack.
Then the waiter came again, and looked like she was going to faint. I tried my hardest not to burst out laughing at how weird the looked. Jack nudged me, and we burst out laughing. It was mean, but I'm not one for holding in laughter.
"A-A-ALEX GASKARTH?" She gasped out.
"How do you know me?" Alex said looking a little scared "ARE YOU SOME PEDOFILE OR SOMETHING?"
I laughed more, and my drink nearly went up my nose. Unluckily for Jack , his pepsi was coming out of his nose. Zac, Rian and Rick were giggiling like girls.
"No, don't you remember me? We met at that party..." She said.
"Uh no, do you go to my school?" He asked.
"Yes, I'm always around you, you dont remember me?" She asked.
"Sorry, I only remember the pretty ones." Alex said, and we all burst out laughing. She gave me a dirty look and walked away.
"Hey, WHAT DID I DO?" I yelled at her back.
"JEALOUSY IS THE COUZIN OF GREEN!" Jack sang.
"Lol, Cute is what we aim for?" Rian said.
We stayed there for about fifteen minutes.
I got a little tired, and put my head of Alex's shoulder for a couple of mintues. Then I looked up at him.
"Am I pretty?" I said, smiling.
"Oh, you have no idea" He said.

double triple cute

Later that day we ended up at the mall. Jack and the rest of the guys were in the arcade, and me and Alex were walking around the mall, heading for the icecream store.
"Yum, Icecream!" I said, being sarcastic.
"You don't like icecream?" Alex said, pretending to be shocked.
"No, ofcourse I love icecream!" I said, pretending to slap him.
"Ouch!, that hurt," He said pretending to be sad.
"Do you know how gorgeous you are?" Alex said, putting his hand on my face.
I blushed like mad but kept silent.
"You're gorgeous. Don't let anyone tell you that you aren't." Alex said.
"Thanks," I said, blushing.
I pulled him into a hug.
We walked in the food court, and headed for the icecream shop.
When we were up to order, Alex stood up straight, and put his hand on his head, like millitary position.
"ID LIKE A BUBBLEGUM ICECREAM PLEASE, AND THE LADY WOULD LIKE COOKIE DOUGH!" He said, sounding firm.
I started giggiling, and he gave me a weird look, which caused me to giggle even more.
"Ew, that's a freshman, Gaskarth. What are you doing with her?" A disgusted tone said.
I looked up to see Lana behind the counter, that girl he waved at.
"Um excuse me?" I asked.
"Shut up," She said, looking at Alex.
"Why would the answer to that be your problem?" Alex asked.
"Once everyone at school finds out you'll be the loser." She said, looking amused.
"I could care less if I was popular or not, My friends are the only thing I need." Alex sneered.
"Anyways, you only used me to get popular." He said.
"Hanging out with a freshman is worse than using someone to get popular." Lana said.
"No, it's not. Because I have real feeling for Krystal. And you had no real feelings for me. You used me, but I'm not using Krystal." Alex said.
"I'm pregnant." She said.
"Y-y-you're what?" Alex choked out, looking ready to faint.
"With yours." She said.
I couldn't stand it anymore. I walked away from them. I could hear Alex calling my name, and I ran to my car. Once I got in, i leaned on the wheel crying.
I had real feelings for Alex. He was like no other boy I've met. He seemed real, and he was the perfect one it seemed. He ment more than the whole world to me. But I knew I couldn't have him, because of Lana. It wasn't her fault, she wasn't happy about it, and neither was Alex. I couldn't stand it anymore. Mabey Maryland was a huge mistake afterall.
"Krystal, let me in." Jack said, tapping at the window.
I unlocked the car, and Jack climbed in, and sat next to me since I had one of those cars that had three seats in the front. He hugged me.
"What's wrong?" He asked.
"Everything," I said, crying.
"Alex?" He asked.
"Yes." I sobbed.
"What happened?" He asked.
"Lana's pregnant... with Alex's." I said.
"You like him don't you?" He asked.
"Like crazy. I-I-I think I might be in love with him." I cried.
"I love you too," A voice came up.
Alex got in the car and hugged me.
"I don't care what the fuck she's got in her body, I love you, and I want to be with you forever." Alex said.
"Will you go out with me?" He asked.

well....is the story over?

lol no .
im gunna upate laterr tho . xD