Tomorrow the finished project will be done.And then I think I'll just stop with the stories...

NUUUU!!! i can help you! feed you ideas, anything! just don't stop writing stories! they're good!!!

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Originally posted by Crazy Sparkle Monster:
NUUUU!!! i can help you! feed you ideas, anything! just don't stop writing stories! they're good!!!

I'm sorry....I had originally planned on writing a sequel to this story....but in the end I just decided to end it.then you said you wanted to continue it so....I just kind of let it be.

well....will you write OTHER stories???????

love stories or just stories in general??

i dun care! just more stories!!!

Well I mostly favor in love stories. Thats the best of my writing abilities really...so I guess in the end probably.......no

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Ok guys the final part is finished!It will be up in a sec....

I'M WAITING AXIOUSLY!!

Part 3 (FINAL PART)

Celia's POV

I was lying in my room trying to forget about him. I wanted to see him so bad but not if he was going to act that way.I guess he just doesnt feel the way I did when I met him..."Celia I just got a phone call!" my mother called to me. "What was it about?!" I shouted back to her. "Your little friend's mother just called me.......she said he has escaped from the hospital. All of his clothes are missing and everything!" She called to me. A jolt instantly flew through me when she said that. I looked at the clock.....it read 11:30 P.M. "Omg its getting really cold out, he shouldnt be out in weather like this. But why do I care......he said such terrible things...why should I have to go help him, I should just forget about him.......that way I can't be hurt again."

Back at the hospital....

I hopped out of the window and dangled a little.....the fall was pretty high. I landed in a pretty big heap of snow which caused me to shriek. "I c-can't lay here o-or theyll find me and bring me back." I pulled myself to my knees and started running. I had no idea where to go though. "was her house this way? Or that way- wait I've never even been to her house!" I kept running.......I had to at least try to find the residents of the Moretti's. I was running through nothing but trees trying to find an opening somewhere. I came to a frozen pond, on the other side of it was a road that looked like it lead to some familiar looking houses. "Damnit! Well If I spread out my weight over the ice then it has less of a chance of cracking.....right? Man I better get an award for thinking this well with a concussion."I delicately stepped onto the ice. It seemed pretty solid. I started walking a little fatser as it seemed safe. "Wow this isnt so - WOAH!" I slipped and fell to what would have seemed to be the end of everything but nothing happened....I opened my eyes to see the ice completely fine."Wow talk about a close call. If I had hit my head it would have been over!" I pulled myself up to see my leg out of place in an awkward manner. It hurt to step on it. "This is just perfect." I glanced a my watch it was 11:46."I only have a little bit of time left I better hurry." I went to move my leg but stopped to hear the most terrifying sound you could hear on ice.*SPLIT* "Gahhhh" I shouted and closed my eyes to embrace myself for the freezing water.I sat there for what seemed like forever but in reality was only 10 seconds. I wasnt cold or wet at all. I opened my eyes slowly.I saw the chunks of ice split into severaly smaller parts.I was in the middle of a breaking pond of ice with a concussion on Christmas Eve......call me the luckiest guy ever."If I'm just really careful I should get across this with a little bit of water on my feet." I lied to myself.I stepped on one piece of ice that sunk a little but only enough to get the bottom of my shoe wet. "Ok only 4 more to get across". I stepped again. My foot sunk in a little more,this piece was a little smaller than the last one.I managed past that one and stood on the 3rd piece because it was big enough.I was terrified but it was all for her......I couldnt give up now.I quickly stepped to the fourth and final piece of ice.I glanced up to see a familiar shape running in the distance.....I couldnt believe my eyes it was her, she had come to find me and embrace me with her love...*SPLUNK* I felt my body sink down really fast. I let out one of the loudest screams I've ever done. I then realized that the ground lowered into the pond so I was only about a foot into the water.I quickly dashed out of the water to the freedom that was land. I had felt my eyes starting to lower. I was getting really tired. I couldnt see anything but my breath in the cold air. I then remembered the doctor "Your very lucky you woke up from that deep sleep.Some people never wake up when falling asleep with concusions"."oh my god this cant be happening I said to myself. I have to wake up.....I HAVE TO." I pulled my eyes open and started running towards Celia who was quickly running for me. She must have seen me struggling to stay conscious.

Celia's POV

I was running towards him.....my heart was racing I don't think I've ever been this terrified.I glanced at my watch it read 11:56 P.M. I was approaching him and then I saw the scariest thing. He had dropped to his knees and lied down into the snow. "OH MY GOD NOOO" I ran towards his drifting body.

My POV

I couldnt see anything. I had failed.......my head was spinning and that drop to the ground which looked like nothing, really took a toll on my head. I opened my eyes and saw here hands reaching for me. I saw a quick glance at her watch. My eyes shocked me......it was 11:58 P.M. I jolted up and sat up instantly. I grabbed her by the shoulder "Celia listen,I'm terribly sorry for what I said in the hospital.....my heart was telling me to say it but my mind wouldnt let me. I was so depressed about what had happened and-" I was drifting off again......adrenaline isnt so helpful with love."listen! What I'm trying to say is that I love-" Our lips instantly met.This time not for CPR....and then I felt something hit me on the head but this time it wasnt a giant light.......It was starting to rain.

What became of this lovesong after this faithful night? Thats for you to decide........But I can tell you It's no doubt that the ones shining together were the two of us. Like I said though Its for you to decide....

The End

........ugh. that was....grrrr why is it over???

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Originally posted by Crazy Sparkle Monster:
........ugh. that was....grrrr why is it over???

because its the last lovesong on this little planet...

but...but...i wanna refund!!!

why you didnt like it???

i do but....i hate it when stories end....