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My first fan fic about a guy falling in love for the first time.....
"Like a Lovesong" (Part one) It started to rain as it did on most December days. I personally feel the sensation of love when I feel the light drops of water fall on my hair. I guess you can call me an average guy, not popular but not a geek.Just your typical guy that has a somewhat sense of emotion.Well actually It can work either ways sometimes.......but thats besides the fact. It all started on the last week of school until Christmas. That beautiful time of the year,I know spare me the details. I guess you can say I wasnt too happy even though It was christmas. Call me Scrooge call me whatever you want. But it was also that day that my life changed from being completely depressed and average to the phoenix of a million hearts. It was the day that she moved to my town,her,the one that would change my life. "Okay class please give a warm seasonal welcome to our new student Celia!" It was almost unbelievable how amazing she looked in her red sweater."She has just moved here from Europe! So be nice because she might not know her way around.Okay Celia now to choose your seat.......hmm how about this fine gentleman!" It must have been the greatest five seconds of my life.......that one sentence. The girl of my dreams was actually paired up with me. "so what part of Europe are you from?" I asked completely nervously. "I'm from Italy" she responded. "Oh thats cool......I love the bread from there" and that was the best I could come up with..........anything but that would have been great but no I had to say bread.This was going to be a long week until Christmas...... All that day I couldnt stop thinking about her eyes......I even found myself listening to more of romance music then the regular music I usually listen to.(and I can tell you it certainly wasnt romance) The walk home was a pretty quiet one. I bet you can guess what was on my mind. I walked up my wet steps only to find that my door was locked."Damnit wheres the key? Not under the mat or in the mailbox.....I guess I'll just have to get the spare key from my neighbor...."I walked next door to my neighbors house and knocked on the door. "Oh hello who is it???" My neighbor responded."Its just me Mrs.Smith!" I called back to her deaf ears. "Oh are you here for a key?" "Yeah I can't find mine" I responded. "Oh you kids and forgetting everything.......now where did I put that key, I cant seem to remember" The Irony in that situation damn near killed me. "Oh here it is" She shouted to herself. "Thank you Mrs.Smith..." I couldnt stop spacing out about Celia.I was quickly pulled out of my thoughts by her response."You know, you look like your in love" she remarked. "Whaaaa?????" I couldnt believe how off guard she had caught me. But I didnt want to lie."Well you see-" "I remember when Henry was still alive" she quickly interrupted."Oh how I miss him so much..." I couldnt help but feel bad for her.Her husband had died about 2 years back. A really great guy he was..... "Well I dont want to drown you in my sorrow so I'll let you be on your way" she finally said. "okay thanks Mrs.Smith.." The Next Day: The day started kind of slow for me. I couldnt wait for science class though. I couldnt wait to see Celia with her brown eyes and hair.Her beauty was a lot like the beauty out of a fairytale. 7th Period finally arrived.....It was time for the best part of the day. I walked into class and saw Celia talking to the teacher. I wanted to approach her so badly but I just couldnt.....something was stopping me from going up to her and saying "hi, If you knew how much I loved you,you would probably scream and run." When I finally got up the courage to say Hi I heard someone in the distance call out "hey dude get out of the-"and everything went dark and silent. I thought I was dead. Thats right halo over my head with a harp in one hand.I woke up a few minutes later with a bad headache and Celia's lips against mine. That was when I thought for sure I was dead. It turns out she was giving me CPR. I still couldnt complain though. After holding my eyes open long enough to tell it was her I passed out again. I woke up hours later in a hospital bed. "Wha- what happened?" I quickly questioned."A loose light came off the ceiling and hit you on the head...." it was a familiar voice that I had only heard once.I looked up quickly to see a painful light and a shadow that resembled Celia. "You werent breathing and the teacher was freaking out so I had to give you CPR" she said in a delicate voice. "YOU saved me?" I said somewhat harshly."Yeah is there something wrong?" she said sympathetically. "yes there's something wrong why would you give me CPR thats just.....disgusting!" I couldnt believe I was saying this. My mind was going crazy. It was just too hard to process all of this."I'm sorry that I was the reason your still alive" she said coldly and ran out. She looked like she was crying.I finally realised what I had just done."Damn why do I have to be such a coward.....why can't I just tell her how I feel?" I screamed into my pillow.I decided to just lay there in anger until I fell back to sleep. Before I drifted off I listened to the window......It was starting to rain. I'm planning on updating after I get enough comments. This message has been edited. Last edited by: Build God,then Thank god for Esteban, _____________________________ Nothing new under the sun...... Like a Lovesong: http://boards.fueledbyramen.com/artists/panicatthedisco...060068/m/60510128811 It's these Substandard Motels: http://boards.fueledbyramen.com/artists/panicatthedisco...060068/m/31910090911 Through They Eyes of the Cabin: http://boards.fueledbyramen.com/artists/panicatthedisco...68/m/97410994911/p/1 |
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Hey! I love the new story!!
It rocks. And so do you This message has been edited. Last edited by: diamond.daydream, ------------------------------ Hello, My name is Chanice. I'm Canadian. That's right, be jealous, I live in an igloo. ------------------------- Jon Walker Wins At Life. |
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lqtm "THATS DISGUSTING!"
that just made me laugh. i like this story though. it certainly has potential
water I've been adopted by Rachel Owns, and I've adopted Rose, Mika, Annabelle, Allison, Kelly, Kendra, and Sasha!! Dalila is my sister, and so is Kelsey <3 AND I have a badass brother Miguel! But he's really Ryan Ross. But he doesn't know it yet... |
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Update?
------------------------------ Hello, My name is Chanice. I'm Canadian. That's right, be jealous, I live in an igloo. ------------------------- Jon Walker Wins At Life. |
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PLEASE? ^-^
------------------------------ Hello, My name is Chanice. I'm Canadian. That's right, be jealous, I live in an igloo. ------------------------- Jon Walker Wins At Life. |
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For your #1 fan? ^-^
------------------------------ Hello, My name is Chanice. I'm Canadian. That's right, be jealous, I live in an igloo. ------------------------- Jon Walker Wins At Life. |
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Because you rock my sox.
------------------------------ Hello, My name is Chanice. I'm Canadian. That's right, be jealous, I live in an igloo. ------------------------- Jon Walker Wins At Life. |
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hey, i was his number one fan first!
water I've been adopted by Rachel Owns, and I've adopted Rose, Mika, Annabelle, Allison, Kelly, Kendra, and Sasha!! Dalila is my sister, and so is Kelsey <3 AND I have a badass brother Miguel! But he's really Ryan Ross. But he doesn't know it yet... |
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Oh.
------------------------------ Hello, My name is Chanice. I'm Canadian. That's right, be jealous, I live in an igloo. ------------------------- Jon Walker Wins At Life. |
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Can't we be his #1 fanS?
------------------------------ Hello, My name is Chanice. I'm Canadian. That's right, be jealous, I live in an igloo. ------------------------- Jon Walker Wins At Life. |
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but you can be the number one fan for this fic, cuz you read it before me! i'm just his number one writing in general fan. but you can be the secondary fan! he's my secondary fan! wow that sounds kinda weird...
water I've been adopted by Rachel Owns, and I've adopted Rose, Mika, Annabelle, Allison, Kelly, Kendra, and Sasha!! Dalila is my sister, and so is Kelsey <3 AND I have a badass brother Miguel! But he's really Ryan Ross. But he doesn't know it yet... |
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All of you guys can be my number 1 fan lol
_____________________________ Nothing new under the sun...... Like a Lovesong: http://boards.fueledbyramen.com/artists/panicatthedisco...060068/m/60510128811 It's these Substandard Motels: http://boards.fueledbyramen.com/artists/panicatthedisco...060068/m/31910090911 Through They Eyes of the Cabin: http://boards.fueledbyramen.com/artists/panicatthedisco...68/m/97410994911/p/1 |
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YAY!
*E-hug* ------------------------------ Hello, My name is Chanice. I'm Canadian. That's right, be jealous, I live in an igloo. ------------------------- Jon Walker Wins At Life. |
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YAY!!!
water I've been adopted by Rachel Owns, and I've adopted Rose, Mika, Annabelle, Allison, Kelly, Kendra, and Sasha!! Dalila is my sister, and so is Kelsey <3 AND I have a badass brother Miguel! But he's really Ryan Ross. But he doesn't know it yet... |
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I like it. Would it be possible for me to be in it with one of the guys?????
November 6, 2008- PATD, RBLT *****My adopter is Ryro.Is.Love.<3 and my step-adopter is Taylorosaurus Rex***** (picture by flopss) Sofia is my twin... |
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