--Baton Rouge Louisianna, Hardies planation home,1892--
They're coming! Oh, God make them go away! The man from the shadows has finally shown himself and now mamma and daddy and brother are running and screaming and it's so dark! Please god get us through this! I prayed as we all ran through the dark of the house. The...things chasing after us. We told daddy. We told him over and over and over again, but he's so stubborn. Even the priest told him not to get this house! But he wouldn't listen and now the man from the shadow's and the people in the mirrors are chasing us. They won' stop! What did we do to deserve this?! "Mamma!?" I cried out as I heard something from the end of the hallway. There was a scream. A crash. A thud, then it was silent. "...Mamma?" No answer. "Daddy?" Again no answer. "Brother?!" I called out in a harsh whisper. I walked back into the kitchen cautiously. There was something wet on the floor. The silver light from the moon hit the liquid to show a dark red, with long brown hair and pale skin in it. "Mamma! Oh mamma!" I fell to my knee's and started crying. The beautiful women once full of life was gone. There was another scream. Daddy. I didn't dare run to him; afraid of what I might see. Instead, I ran to the door. Past all our furniture, past all the paintings and mirrors; not once stopping. If I stopped, the mirror people would've got me, or given the dark man time to find me. The door! The way out of here! To help! Tears were streaming down my face as the exit approached. Then I felt something tugging on my hair. Yanking it, grabbing my arms, dress, legs. They were everywhere! They got me! I let out a scream and fought against the shadows. It hurt, I could feel them tearing at my skin, pulling my hair out, clawing at my body. Then nothing but more blackness. I could see mamma, and daddy, and brother. At least we were safe now.

--Baton Rouge,Present Day--
We're thousands of miles away from home, stuck in cramped van, with a broken air condition,no cold water, and it's 10 million degree's. If the house doesn't kill us, the heat will. Let me Explain first. See, my dad got a job transfer from nice cold weathered Colorado, to heat stroke Louisiana. He bought this house that older people, (like decendents from the first to live here or whatever) told us the house is cursed. That we're signing our own death certificate by moving to this house. Now I'm not a superstious person or anything but, the story they told us was pretty fucking creepy. Apparently no one's lived there for ages, and the last people that did live there were killed by "ghosts". I for one think the story is complete and utter crap but everyone else believe it so, why spoil the fun? "Oh my God, when are we gonna get there?" Jack whined. Jack is my younger brother. Like me he can only sit still so long before he gets irratable. That's why I have my music. To forget i'm not moving. "Soon, honey, we should be there in an hour." My mom replied. We both let out a loud groan and my dad just laughed. "You two are going to love the house! It will be worth the wait." I rolled my eyes and stared out the window, slowly falling asleep.

As dad told us we arrived an hour later. The house was really creepy looking. It looked like it was going to fall apart any minute, there was moss and vines climbing up the left side of the house, and because of all the tree's the shadow's only added on to the creepiness. There was no way we were living here. "Mom...dad...no chance in HELL am I staying here. Please tell me this is a joke!" I exclaimed giving the house a disgusted look. Jack was giving it the same look I was. "First off young lady, watch your language," mom started, "second the inside is nicer then the outside. Just give it a chance." Jack and I looked at eachother then rolled our eyes, walking up to the house and stepping inside. Well, they weren't lying. The house was really dark, but it was beautiful. There was still antique furniture and little designs carved into the wood. There were still old carpets laying around. I walked up the stairs to take a look at my room. It was huge! It had a one of those windows I could walk out side and stand on the deck. You could see over the tree's. I loved it! Maybe this place wouldn't be so bad after all. But there was an eerie feeling in the house. Maybe it was just the story getting to me but it was still creepy. I shook my head and turned back to the door and stopped;doing my best to choke back the scream. There was a man standing in my doorway.
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Uhmmm ghost story anyone? Ha. Questions? Comments? Concerns?

Oooooooh CREEPY

I feel bad for the little girl

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Hmmm...Intriguing...GHOSTSTORYORLY? LOL i like it!

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"Holy!" I quckily grabbed my MP3 and through it at him. "Whoa! What was that for?!" He yelled dodging the object to the best of his ability and staring at me wide eyed. "You're a stranger in my house! What do you expect me to do?!" I yelled staring him down. He tilted his head ,and it was just adorable as he did so, then hit his forehead and laughed. "Forgot! Im the land keepers son, I take care of the plantation and the inside of the house. Well, used to anyway. Unless you guys plan on keeping us around..." He had a cute southern accent too... I thought tuneing out his rambling. I snapped out of it once he stopped talking and shook his head again. "But, anyway, i'm Brendon, and you are..?" He extended his hand. I smiled and shook it. "I'm Kailie, nice to meet you Brendon." He smiled and took his hand back. "Nice to meet you too, Kailie. So...why'd your folks buy this house? It's so weird." He stated looking around cautiously. Almost like his words would kill him. I sighed and shrugged. "Don't ask me, because i have no earthly idea." He laughed and nodded. He had a cute laugh...and pretty eyes. They were almost black but not quite. A dark brown color? But ugh, if it wasn't his eyes it was his lips! They were huge! They looked kissable and- "Kailie, yooohoo Ms. Kailie. You there?" He was wavingh is hand in front of my face. "Uhm, sorry what?" He smirked and shook his head. "I see this house is already getting to that pretty little head of yours. But don't worry, there's nothing here to fear. Trust me." I smiled and nodded. I know, I don't believe in spook stories." His smile faltered a little and his eyes danced across the room. I tilted my head watching him. His facial expression becoming more serious. "I have to go now. Stay safe." With that he left me alone in the room. I shook my head and went back down stairs to help unpack.

A few hours later we had most of our stuff unpacked, thanks to the help of the movers who got here a few days earlier. My parents decided it would be easier considering they know what we're doing and we obviously don't considering the house was huge. My mom trusted them and I gotta say, they did a pretty nice job. Mom,dad, and Jake went out to pick up the pizza and I stayed behind to watch the sunset from my window. It was really nice. Watching the stars was prettier. Then something strange happened. As I was pulling on my pajama pants I heard a horse neigh. But we don't have horses here... And i'm pretty sure the wild horses would steer clear of this place, to many snakes from what the old land keeper told my parents. I raised and eyebrow and walked to the back where the prettiest horse was standing in the middle of the field. It was beautiful! It was kinda red, with a little white spot on the side of its belly. I pulled on my shoes and carefuly walked out to it. I didn't want to scare the poor thing. "Hey there big guy. "I whispered softly moving closer to him. He didn't even flinch; just stood there and watching me back..I thought nothing of it and smiled, starting to pet him. Then his eyes turned black, and i felt something coarse on my hand. I looked down and screamed. There was hair, and blood all over my hand. I kept screaming;trying to shake it off and looked back at the horse to make sure it was okay. Its eyes were completley black, it's hair was falling off as the wind blew, there was blood all over it. My eyes widened and I screamed louder. The horse stood on his hind legs and I just stared, to paralyzed with fear to move. As the horse came crashing down on my head, there was blackness then I jumped. "Kailie?! Kailie wake up!" I blinked a few times then opened my eyes fully. Brendon was hovering over me, his eyes wide with fear. "We heard you screaming and came running out here! What happened?!" He was pretty much yelling and clutching my shoulders. "Uhm..." How would I explain this? How did he not see the horse? "Oh, sweet lord what did you do to your hand?! Were you bit by a snake?!" He asked grabbing my hand. It was purpleish, and kinda swollen. "Is she okay?!" A man with gray hair came running out to us. He had grayish black hair, and looked a lot like Brendon, only thinner lips. "I don't know dad, her hand...i think she was bit." His dad knelt down beside me and looked at my hand. "Do you remember anything what happened?" I gave them both the dumbest look. "How did you not see the horse?!" I yelled. They both exchanged weird looks. "What?" Brendon asked. I sat up and rolled my eyes. "The red horse. His hair...it...it started falling off and there was blood all over him! How did you not see him?!" I asked again. His dad's face got serious. "You best be getting her inside Brendon. I'll be right back with the health kit." He said and stood up walking away, leaving Brendon and I very,very confused. This place is gonna be the death of me.
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Uhm...yeah. Tell me whatcha think!

creeeepy.....

aww it's meant to be... o.<

lqtm at Brendon being from the south

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