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So I never finished it, and here's the end.

You can read it all from start to finish on Mibba.

http://www.mibba.com/story/Ryrose123/I-Have-The-Feeling-Alcohol-Replaced-Me/

Chapter Twenty-Two:

I jumped seeing my mother answer the door.
"Mom?" I said, regaining my composure.
"Rylee, please tell me you're joking...you didn't actually stab someone did you?"
"Well...about that....."
She clutched my shoulders.
"You didn't..."
"I...did.."
She squeazed my shoulders.
"Get off of me!" I shouted.
She jumped back, surprised at my outburst.
"Rylee...did you just shout at me?"
I nodded quickly.
"But I was just trying to help you..."
"You...you wanna help me? Since when....you didn't want to when I was born....I when daddy started drinking....it was all about you.."
"Honey, we talked about this....."
"Well I don't care! You gave up on me. I don't owe it to you to tell you anything...if anything it's the other way around...but I'll tell you..I stabbed him, Jayson Beckett, right in the thigh! Happy!?"
She looked at me with eyes, either about to tear up, or scream at me.
"I can't.. be-"
"believe it? Neither can I..." I said finishing her sentence. "Now..where's Mylo..."
"He's not home.." She said crossing her arms, taking a stand for once. "And I'm taking you home."
I smirked. "I never thought my own mother would take me home to foster parents....hmm...weird."
She rolled her eyes.
"Well...I'm coming in....." I said walking in.
"But this isn't your house..."
"Neither is it yours....and who do you think Mylo cares for more...you or me? And who do you think Ryan cares for more? Mylo or you?"
She was speechless, but I pushed her aside and strutted into the house. I heard her close the door, and start to walk towards the phone.
"Don't dial it..." She put the phone down. I let out a sigh of relief.
"I'm not calling them...they're walking up the driveway."
I almost screamed, and ran towards the bathroom, because I didn't know where else to go.
I hide inside the sink cabinet and hoped she wouldn't blab to them.
I quivered and shook. I waited there for what seemed like 10 minutes, until I heard someone walked into the bathroom. Assuming it was my mother, I braced myself for a moment, and then rolled out of the cabinet.
I lay there on the rug of the bathroom, on my back staring up at Mylo....about to use the toilet.
Naked...well...the important part that is....
Okay...I saw his dick!
He jumped when he saw me and quickly zipped up his pants.
I lay there on the ground, completely still. But fair enough, he had seen me completely naked...and dressed me...oops.
"Rylee!" He said looking at me bewildered. "What, what are you doing in my bathroom....and in the cabinet for that matter...?"
"I was hiding..."
"Clearly...but..from who?"
"Long story short.... I stabbed Jayson's thigh, stole a girl's bike, rode here, screamed at my mother, and hid in here when they came to your door looking for me."
"oh well...in that case...." He said rubbing the back of his head. "do you....wanna to stand up..?"
"oh...yeah..." I said jumping up.
"so...I guess she didn't tell them..." He told me, taking me to his room.
He sat me down and looked right in my eyes.
"You, stabbed him?"
"Yes...I just couldn't stand it anymore.."
He nodded. "I understand..."
"Mylo.."
"Yes?"
"I love you..."
He looked at me like he was about to see something.
Then, I screamed. In the window behind Mylo, I saw him.
Alex.
He had actually come for me.
Mylo jumped and grabbed the sides of my face.
"Ry, what's wrong!"
I pointed behind him, he turned and jumped and shielded my face just as Alex threw a rock through the window, shattering the glass, shards flying everywhere.
The slim boy crawled through the jagged window and towards me, blood streaming down his face.
"C'mere" I shrink back, and Mylo stood in front of me.
But just as soon as he began with the heroics, he was struck to the side, and a blunt object headed towards my temple.
And from there it goes black. I want to believe Mylo tried his hardest to help me. But he must of ultimately failed, because only seconds later I woke up to find myself speeding away in the back of a car driven by Alex. I wanted to scream, but as I made this realization, the car turned a sharp corner.
So sharp that we headed into oncoming traffic.
And into an oncoming car.
Let me rephrase that.
Not we.
Me.
Only my end of the car flew into the truck.
Lucky Me.



(Mylo's POV)

That's when I saw it.
The destruction.
The carnage.
The wreck that would forever change my life.
The one girl that I ever truely loved was in that car.
And, it was all their fault.
Them.
They drove her to the edge, and came back to worsen it.
They wouldn't live this down.
I wouldn't let them.
I couldn't.



The End. So....maybe a sequel a little later on...hmm. Atm I'm planning another fic. So, feedback on this one?
Thanks.


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OH MA GOD!!!!! THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOO LIKE TIMES A MILLION AMAZING!!!!!


im glad you finally finished it.


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thanks.

this, time for my next fic, I'm going to try to right most of it before posting.
And I'm going to post it on mibba as well, it can't get locked there...
well not as easily....


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bump.


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