So I can't seem to keep up with my stories >.< Blahh. But I'm going to really try to keep this one up.

Rating: PG-13 and maybe some R
Genre: Love babbbayyy ;]]


Hope you like my story. When you read it, please do comment, I love feedback from all of you xD

"Her body was built for sin, and my god how she knows how to use it!"
I took a deep breath.

"Welcome to the stage, our very own, Candy!!"

I walked onto the stage, same as I did every other night. The men cheered as the spotlight hit me. As the music started I stripped off my robe. So there I stood, sequin push-up bra, black cheeky panties and very high heels. My face made up with so much eyeliner my lids felt heavy.

I got closer to the edge of the stage and knelt down. Men grabbed at me, threw $20's before me. My body belonged here, belonged to the music, but my mind was some place else. Where I didn't have to strip my clothes off for a living. One thing I didn't know was the boy I would eventually fall in love with was in the crowd that night.

Brendon's POV

Don't get me wrong. I looove women, but when Ryan told me he was dragging me along to Kitty's Strip Club downtown I was immediately filled with regret.
"Ryan, do I really have to go?"
He sighed.
"Brendon, yes we have to go. I need to go and I want to take someone with me. Who better to ask than you?"
"Jon? Spence? I don't know. I love women Ry, with their clothes on, occasionally with them off. But all those women without their clothes...all those men throwing money at them...well it's just sad."
Ryan laughed.
"What's so funny Ryan?"
"Sad?! B, these girls want to do these jobs."
I gave him a disgusted look.
"Who told you that? Macy?"
He came up to me with a finger in my face.
"Don't EVER talk about her like that! You very well know why she does that job."
With that he stomped off.
"Meet me at Kitty's around five!" he shouted from the door.

I got up from the couch. It was 4:30.
"Well, I might as well go get ready." I went to the bathroom and got in the shower. It was 4:50 when I finally decided to get out. By the time I finished getting ready it was 5:05. Eh, Ryan could wait to see Macy, she's probably busy playing nurse in one of the backrooms taking care of some guys 'needs'.

I pulled up to the intersection where the club was at. When I got to the lot Ryan ran to my car and banged on the window. I got out.
"Dude! You were supposed to be here at 5!! NOT 5:30!!!"
"You can live Ry, it's not like every minute you're late Macy's boobs are going to shrink."

He scoffed.
"I'm not worried about that. Let's just go."
At this point I was starting to get very agitated with Ryan. He acted like he would die with out Macy. Frankly, I don't like her. She's a whore, and I'm not just saying that because she works at a strip club.

As I walked in a group of girls came over to me and Ryan.

"Well hello boys."
Those sultry words came from a busty brunette.
"Don't bother girls." I looked back and there was Macy. Don't get me wrong...she's pretty hot but something about her thong and black star pasties combo screams 'I don't care how many people I get busy with'.

Ryan strutted over to her and kissed her. Tongue and all. I walked away and found an empty table. When I looked up I swear I saw the most beautiful girl on the Earth.
She looked at me and our eye met. Her eyes weren't filled with sexual excitement like every other girl here. Her eyes were filled with sadness. Filled with a longing of wanting to be anywhere but here.

Woooo, this first chapter is sorta long;;sorry!!! Hope you guys enjoyed it though. Make sure to comment please!!! xD

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I'll get more as soon as I finish writing the second chapter!! I'm sooo glad you LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE it :]]]]

this is really good! more? please?

if you guys could please keep this going, i have been really busy lately with school so i haven't gotten much done for the second chapter. but hopefully i get it up soon!!!

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Update.

FINALLY an update :] Sorry it took so long D:

Something about that girl made me want to be with her. She looked at me for a while and walked off as someone called her name. Ryan strutted up to me with Macy.

"Dude, if you think that chick's hot, go tell her you want to play with her."

Macy laughed as Ryan whispered something in her ear.
"Ryan, you're drunk. I'm not just going to tell her that. There's something different about her..." My eyes moved to where the girl was standing. Some guy was harassing her. I got up and started walking towards her.
"WAY TO GO BRENNYYYYY!!!!!" Ryan was slurring his words as he yelled at me.

I ignored him and walked straight up to the guy harassing the beautiful girl.
"What do you think you're doing harassing this lady man?!"
He looked at me and laughed.
"What are you gonna do about it? You're a wimp. Get out of here." He slapped the girl on the butt and she got a pained look on her face.
That set me off.
I raised my hand and balled it into a fist. Next thing I knew my fist connected with his face and he fell backwards. I stood there and watched as he knocked over his drink.
"YOU!" He swung at me and hit me right between the ribs.
I fell back, out of breath. I stared up at the ceiling not being able to breathe. To my right there was the girl...a look of pure horror on her face.
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I woke up to bright lights above me.
"He's awake!! Guys he's awake!!!"
Ryan stood up and Spencer and Jon ran into the room.
Spencer sat on the edge of the bed.
"WHAT WERE YOU THINKING?!?!?! That guy was a lot bigger than you are."
I shook my head.
"I don't know. He was harassing that girl and I just felt like I had to do something."
Jon spoke up.
"What girl?"
Ryan laughed.
"Some girl he saw last night and had the hots for."
I hit Ryan.
"She's not just some girl Ryan. I told you, there's something about her that just pulls me in."
Immediately the guys all got worried looks on their faces.
"It's okay you guys. I mean...it's just a girl right?"
The worry faded as I said this.
"Good, then we're gonna go get some rest." Ryan and Jon walked out of the room.
"I don't believe you when you say she was just a girl B. You're not the type to say that." Spencer walked out of the room after he said that.

He was right. I don't say those kinds of things. I mean, when I fall, I fall flat on my face. Her face with pure horror came into mind. Her face being the last thing I saw before I blacked out. I had to see her and tell her that I was okay....

So not the best update ever...but hopefully you guys like it :]

i like this
please update soooon

So, I have been so lazy with updates lately >.<

Imma try to get the third chapter done this weekend and my Thanksgiving Break is next week so I'll update then :]]

yeay