here's my first try at writing a story with someone!! yay and its really good so far, and you won't have to smell my ass writing (yet anyway)!! anywaaay...here it is!!



Hazel looked up sharply, then relaxed. The door was being pounded on, but she didn't have to answer it anymore. It wasn't her house anymore. She looked over at the person she lived with, her best friend Anna.

Anna groaned as she got up to answer the door.

"If it's the milk man, I'm lactose intolerant," she called and Hazel smiled.

"What the hell? Its Roger!" Hazel heard.

"OOOH! I didn't know you knew Roger Rabbit! Say PWEASE!!" Hazel shouted out and pranced up to the door.

"Hey you're not a rabbit," she said and did a big pouty face. Roger, her boyfriend, smiled at her. Then he frowned.

"Hey Hazel, wanna go on a drive?" he asked her. Hazel frowned, what he really meant was, We need to talk.

"Uhh...I don't want to. If you wanna break up with me then go ahead," she said, jokingly. But he was still frowning.

"Oh shit," Anna said and walked away.

"Okay then, uhh...nice talking to you!" Hazel called and closed the door.

"But we need to talk!" he called through the door. She put on headphones and started singing a song that her new neighbors had been playing.

"She's not bleeding on that ballroom floor just for the attention, no that would be ridiculous!" she sang loudly. Anna rolled her eyes.

"Come on, we have to go to work now!" Anna said, tugging Hazel to the door. Hazel followed her, but screwed her eyes shut and kept singing loudly, though not very coherently.

When they got to the used bookstore where they worked, Hazel was shushed by her boss and several customers. She smiled apologetically and took off her headphones.

She stood behind the register and opened o book called "The Source" it was a historical novel that was about 1088 pages long. She enjoyed it though.

"Excuse me?" someone asked her. She blinked and looked up. It was a young man who was about her age. It was also her new neighbor.

"Hola! What can I do you for?" she said, using her fake Canadian accent. She grinned at him.

"Hehe, I was looking for a good book. For a friend," he explained.

"Okay, whats he like?" she asked.

"Umm...tall, skinny, quiet," he said. She smiled at him and led him to the special Hemmingway Section.

"Boys like that always love Hemmingway. Has he read this one?" she asked him, showing him a book called "The Man and the Sea"

"Umm...I don't think so..." he said, studying it, "What's it about?" he asked her.

"Its about an old man who is on a small fishing boat and he starts to catch a fish, but its a grandfather fish. And the fish drags him farther and farther out to sea. Its really good, very simple though," she said, stroking the cover. She was a total bookworm.

"I'm Brendon, thanks for the advice..." he said, proffering his hand. She smiled and shook it.

"I'm Hazel. I like to think I was named after the rabbit in 'Watership Down,'" she told him.

"Don't you live next door?" he asked her.

"Yeah, with Anna. I hear you guys play all the time. You're good," she said and took the book to the checkout with him.

Anna saw them, smirked and whistled. Hazel glared and muttered, 'Real mature.'


YAY!!!

Well, nobody's replied yet but oh well! Here's the next part that I wrote! Ennnnnnnnjooooooooooy!!!!


*Anna’s POV*
Anna giggled to herself. Yes, the whistle had been immature but so much fun! Anna was restocking shelves and watching her best friend Hazel flirting innocently with that boy who had just walked in. It looked like their next-door neighbor. She started imagining what it would be like if Hazel started going with this guy and dumped that loser Roger. She suddenly found herself intensely hoping that would happen. Anna had always secretly hated Roger. He wasn’t good enough for Hazel! Hazel had been her best friend since they were kids and Anna was very protective of her and Roger was simply a jerk. However, she couldn’t exactly tell this to Hazel because she really liked Roger and would be very upset if Anna hated him and in all likeliness she would dump him. She had always taken everything Anna said too seriously. ‘Well, they might be breaking up anyways….’ Anna thought, remembering Roger’s stop by their house earlier. She turned her attention back to her re-stocking of books. Suddenly she heard a very un-flirtatious comment from Hazel.
“Pancakes?? I LOVE pancakes!!” Hazel was crying. ‘Goddammit Hazel!! You better hope this boy is as insane as you or else he’s going to run screaming like there are crazy ninjas after him!’ much to her surprise the boy replied
“We have so much in common!! We need to hang out sometime! Maybe you and your friend can stop by to hang out sometime!”
‘God the world is crazy,’ Anna thought.


It's kinda short. Hope you guys like it!

and if you don't like it then Currie will kill you with her knee socks!

WORD!!!!!!

I like this story!
Can I be in it and get Ryan??

sorry, i don't think so. though i'm not quite sure, so you may have to check back later after I have discussed the issue with Parrot.

But there is more to come!! In fact, I'll post the next section right now!!

Hazel's POV

"Wait, you love pancakes too? Omigod! Last time I said that to someone they practically ran screaming..." I said to him and smiled. I was very aware that he was flirting with me, and I was also painfully aware that I have absoletly NO skill in that sort of thing.

I thought about Roger. It was pretty obvious that Anna hated him and he was going to break up with me.

Brendon had invited me and Anna over and inside I jumped around the store and jumped on someone's shoulders for a piggy back ride, but outside I just smiled and said that would be great.

"Hey Hazel, come here," Anna was saying. I looked shyly at Brendon and walked over to her.

"Yes," I asked her quietly.

"You know, I really don't like Roger. But Brendon, is sooo much better for you. If he asks you out, say yes!" she otld me. I rolled my eyes thinking that a boy like that wouldn't ask a book worm like me out on a date.

"Okay," I told her and walked back to Brendon. I suddenly wondered, what if she was right? What if he asked me out? What about Roger? He was going to break up with me...so did that make me free for Brendon?

"Hazel, you can even come to band practice! That would be so fun and I'd really like you to be there," he told me, startling me out of my thoughts. Did he just say he wanted me at band practice. My heart skipped a beat and I thought to it to shut up already.

"Okay, that would be great. I'd love to be there!" I said, but got distracted by another customer. Then Anna greeted them, letting me and Brenond be alone for a little longer. I smiled up at him.

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Originally posted by Dude-Man:
sorry, i don't think so. though i'm not quite sure, so you may have to check back later after I have discussed the issue with Parrot.

But there is more to come!! In fact, I'll post the next section right now!!

Oh ok then
Loved the update!
Update soon.

yay so you won't die!! *jumps around and claps her hands* now we must wait for Parrot to post the next part....dun dun duuun...

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Originally posted by Dude-Man:
yay so you won't die!! *jumps around and claps her hands* now we must wait for Parrot to post the next part....dun dun duuun...

PARROT POST THE NEXT PART!!
I can't wait...

she'll be on later, but we're all waiting!! and it might be a bit after she gets on cuz she'll write the latest next part then post the next part!! and I assured her that when she got on we'd all dance and have a big party!!

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Originally posted by Dude-Man:
she'll be on later, but we're all waiting!! and it might be a bit after she gets on cuz she'll write the latest next part then post the next part!! and I assured her that when she got on we'd all dance and have a big party!!

Hahaha ok then
I guess I'll wait...
Well, I try to wait...

Okay! I'm back! I'm going to post the next part now and then write the next part if that makes any sense at all lol
Glad you're enjoying it!

yay!!!

Alright! It's here! It's very short so I'm sorry, but enjoy!

*Anna's POV*
While Hazel was chatting up the neighbor boy, another boy walked in. Hazel shot me a look telling me to take care of it. I gave her a quick nod and a smile and turned to greet the boy. He was kinda cute.
"Hi! Can I help?" I asked happily
"Ummm...maybe..I was just looking for my friend Brendon" I recognized this boy. He was always walking in and out of the house next door. I figured out that Brendon was the boy Hazel was talking to. I didn't want this boy to interrupt them so i stepped right in front of this boy, maybe too close but oh well, to block his view of the counter.
"Can you describe him for me, please?" I asked him politely
"Umm...well..he's a bit taller than me, has dark hair and he's a spazz?" he said nervously
"Uh-huh. And what's your name?"
"Wh-what does that have to do with anything?"
"Any information can help with the investigation."
"Investigation."
"Yes. The investigation for your friend Brendon. Now. What's your name." during this whole conversation the boy kept trying to look past me and I kept getting in his way.
"It's..."
"RYAN!!!" I span around and 'Ryan' grinned in relief. Brendon was walking towards them and waving. Hazel was standing at the counter looking dreamy and happy. So things went well. Good.
"Look! I found your friend!" I said turning back to Ryan. "My work is done here! Bye!" I said briskly and walked quickly back to the counter to get the scoop from Hazel.