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OK, so this is my first ever fic, so it might not be very good, and the chapters so far are kinda short, so could you please read this first chapter and give comments or suggestions? It would be greatly appreaciated! Wink

I'm not too sure about the whole story plot, so I don't really have a summary here now, but I promise the story will get better! Now enough chit chatter and on with the story!

Chapter 1

Brendon Boyd Urie sighed heavily after what was another catastrophe involving him. He sat up from the bed he was previously lying on and shook his head. He had just broken up with a girl called Sara and their relationship ended with the now former couple in a big fight. Brendon was kind of used to this though, as he had ended relationships with a grand total of 2 girls previously already.

He slowly got up and got dressed into a blue striped shirt and his favorite black skinny jeans. Heading out the door, he sent a text message to his band mate and friend, Ryan Ross.

dude its over again wit sara

Ryan quickly responded with a message of his own.

man u go thru chicks fast but im sry to hear tht

ok fine but can u meet me at SB in like 10 minutes?

Sure bren whatever u say…

Brendon closed his phone and pocketed it, hopping into his car. He sat there for awhile, not starting the car or turning on the air conditioner even though the air was quite stuffy.

Nobody can break hearts better…

He sat in silence, thinking about this lyric from a song by the Plain White T’s, whose lead singer happened to be a big fan of Panic at the Disco.

It’s not like I like to break hearts, it’s just that they were all not right for me…

Brendon reassured himself with that thought and dug his car key into the side of the steering wheel, starting the car. The truth was, he did like experimenting with different girls, dumping them when he felt that they were not right for him. But, of course, he couldn’t bring himself to admit the hard truth.

He drove emotionlessly to Starbucks, and when he got there, he realized he was five minutes early. Brendon proceeded to buy himself a grande latte and sat down on one of the stools by the window, overlooking the outdoor patio where two tables were occupied.

One was dominated with a bunch of caffeine hungry high school students who were trying to squeeze into a seat even though there was clearly not enough room for all of them.

The other was loosely occupied with three college student aged girls. They were all pretty good-looking; two of them were brunettes; one of them black-haired.

Without noticing, he was staring at the raven haired girl for quite some time, because the threesome glared back at him, slightly annoyed. But, their faces brightened when they recognized who they were glaring at.

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Read my fic: I Think I Could Fall For You, If I Could Get Up From The Past.
My one-shot: The Midnight Air Will Do You Good.

Adopted by Taylor! (Taylorosaurus Rex) Getting shanked by her is the consequence of messing with me. Kate (aryndune) is my adopted boardie kid! You will be tracked and hunted down if you mess with her. You have been warned. Alison (Harlequeen) is my glasses buddy! Big Grin
Official undercover agent for Bob's Parade!!
Ali: Somebody, please try and put together the boardie family tree.
Kate: I tried, but Brendon fell on it, cracked it, and then chopped off all of the branches.
Me: THAT IS WIN.

Click my eggs and hatchlings. JUST DO IT. Or I'll SHOOT. Smiler
 
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hey it's really good
but whats the hard truth?
lol


more?


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Yaya! First comment on here! I have this on mibba too lol so some people have already read and commented. I currently have 3 chapters written already so I'll post the second one up when I get more comments! Thanks fer reading and the hard truth will come up haha


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Read my fic: I Think I Could Fall For You, If I Could Get Up From The Past.
My one-shot: The Midnight Air Will Do You Good.

Adopted by Taylor! (Taylorosaurus Rex) Getting shanked by her is the consequence of messing with me. Kate (aryndune) is my adopted boardie kid! You will be tracked and hunted down if you mess with her. You have been warned. Alison (Harlequeen) is my glasses buddy! Big Grin
Official undercover agent for Bob's Parade!!
Ali: Somebody, please try and put together the boardie family tree.
Kate: I tried, but Brendon fell on it, cracked it, and then chopped off all of the branches.
Me: THAT IS WIN.

Click my eggs and hatchlings. JUST DO IT. Or I'll SHOOT. Smiler
 
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I think I like it and I would like to read more : D
You are one of those who writes stories already
aren't you?
because it's really great :]


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Oh my . . .I love it!!!!
Moreeee!
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I love it!!!!!!!! And if ryan needs a love interest I'm avalible Smiler


 
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I LOVE IT! good job Big Grin

If Spencer ever somes into the story....I can be his girl Big Grin
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Anyways. Keep on writing cause I wanna read more.
Just call me Rose.
 
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awesome!! Smiler keep going Smiler
 
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I likee it :]


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UUUPDATE Big Grin pweeaassee?? Smiler
 
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Hi guys!!! Thanks so much for reading and I'll get chappie 2 up and I've been having summer school so I haven't been on for soo long.

and I'm gonna die laughing, I haven't written any stories before and this is my first ever story that makes sense! lol #2 coming up!


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Read my fic: I Think I Could Fall For You, If I Could Get Up From The Past.
My one-shot: The Midnight Air Will Do You Good.

Adopted by Taylor! (Taylorosaurus Rex) Getting shanked by her is the consequence of messing with me. Kate (aryndune) is my adopted boardie kid! You will be tracked and hunted down if you mess with her. You have been warned. Alison (Harlequeen) is my glasses buddy! Big Grin
Official undercover agent for Bob's Parade!!
Ali: Somebody, please try and put together the boardie family tree.
Kate: I tried, but Brendon fell on it, cracked it, and then chopped off all of the branches.
Me: THAT IS WIN.

Click my eggs and hatchlings. JUST DO IT. Or I'll SHOOT. Smiler
 
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Brendon saw their expressions soften and was relieved that he was recognized. He was a tad bit worried that they would think that he was some kind of perverted weirdo. His eyes followed the group as they abandoned their coffee beverages and raced into the coffee shop to greet the rock star.

“Oh. My. Gosh.” The taller brunette uttered breathlessly.

“Uhm, hi?” Brendon said with a small smile turning up the corners of his lips.

The shorter brunette nudged the taller one aside roughly and extended a hand out to Brendon. He chuckled at the sight of this.

“Hello, I’m Hannah!” She introduced. She looked wildly hyper.

“Montana?” Brendon replied, lifting an eyebrow. It seemed like Hannah had exceeded her caffeine intake limits.

The girls laughed at his joke. He had a way with charming people. He shook Hannah’s hand gently before doing an unnecessary introduction of himself out of politeness.

“I’m Brendon, of course,” He said. “And you two?”

He gestured towards the other two females who were still gaping at the celebrity.

“Oh!” The two exclaimed simultaneously. Then the black haired girl that he showed slight interest in stepped forward with a cute grin playing at her lips. He looked up at her eyes and realized they were a striking deep brown, almost black, and that she was a wide-eyed girl.

“I’m Alexis, and this one here, is Michelle.” Alexis explained, pointing to herself and the tall girl.

“Nice to meet you, Hannah, Alexis, and Michelle.” Brendon said pleasantly. He looked down at his watch and realized that it was past the time that Ryan was supposed to meet him.

Ryan, you bitch.

“Why don’t you girls join me for a coffee?” He offered hopefully. He wanted some company right now and since Ryan wasn’t going to show up, it would be perfect timing.

The girls looked at each other, a euphoric expression dawning on their faces. While the girls recovered from their shock from being invited to have coffee with him, he was alerted of a text message on his Sidekick phone when it vibrated.

One new message from Ryan

The message glowed on the screen of his phone and he pressed the read button.

omg im so sry man but I picked up this hot chick…

Brendon was so disgusted that he decided not to keep reading his friend’s message and deleted it. Sure, Ryan was his BFF, but sometimes he was just plainly a man-whore.

He rolled his eyes, but the giggling girls didn’t seem to notice. At least not that he noticed.

A/N: Still really kinda a shorty chapter.


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Read my fic: I Think I Could Fall For You, If I Could Get Up From The Past.
My one-shot: The Midnight Air Will Do You Good.

Adopted by Taylor! (Taylorosaurus Rex) Getting shanked by her is the consequence of messing with me. Kate (aryndune) is my adopted boardie kid! You will be tracked and hunted down if you mess with her. You have been warned. Alison (Harlequeen) is my glasses buddy! Big Grin
Official undercover agent for Bob's Parade!!
Ali: Somebody, please try and put together the boardie family tree.
Kate: I tried, but Brendon fell on it, cracked it, and then chopped off all of the branches.
Me: THAT IS WIN.

Click my eggs and hatchlings. JUST DO IT. Or I'll SHOOT. Smiler
 
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Loved the update!!!! Smiler


I was adopted by Anniebeth! I adopted Maggs, Tiffany, Laura, Bickle, Nikko,BdenIsLove,valence, and PanicMeetThePress915. Taylor is my twin, and Bethany And Kendra are my grandnewbs. <3
Official Parader Smiler
Rachel owns more than I do. Smiler

 
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Thanks! More comments and chapter 3 will be up! Happy 1300 post too, lol.


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Read my fic: I Think I Could Fall For You, If I Could Get Up From The Past.
My one-shot: The Midnight Air Will Do You Good.

Adopted by Taylor! (Taylorosaurus Rex) Getting shanked by her is the consequence of messing with me. Kate (aryndune) is my adopted boardie kid! You will be tracked and hunted down if you mess with her. You have been warned. Alison (Harlequeen) is my glasses buddy! Big Grin
Official undercover agent for Bob's Parade!!
Ali: Somebody, please try and put together the boardie family tree.
Kate: I tried, but Brendon fell on it, cracked it, and then chopped off all of the branches.
Me: THAT IS WIN.

Click my eggs and hatchlings. JUST DO IT. Or I'll SHOOT. Smiler
 
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