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Here I lie in the bathtub in the process of dying and death.
I can’t speak and I can’t breathe. But luckily I was never much of a talker. It’s really a beautiful thing, death . . . well maybe it’s the way my blood floods the porcelain. How it looks like butterfly wings. Forever spreading as the blood forever flows out my wounds. There he lies. Just where the bullet pushed him to fall.. Blood darkens his hair as it pours out of his head. He moans in pathetic pain. Blood dribbles/skis down his nose and rest upon his lips. His hand twitches and he begins to curl into his body. Involuntary of course. Everything in the process of dying is involuntary. He shakes violently, violently out of control. After this dance he stills. Everything from his face, my face, the window to the wall . . . is covered with blood now. Splattered with dots that would make Monet proud. He sleepily gazes over to me. He can’t speak and his breathing is getting heavier as he tries harder to keep alive. But his brown eyes say all that he never said. I have about a ounce of energy left . . . i dip my fingertips in my blood and I manage to write “?” before everything fades to black. (so. . .do you like it?. Its a story that's gonna be going backwards. to lead up to this.) This message has been edited. Last edited by: Luv.MoisheMax., ____I know what you mean.__ I likea to (attempt)lurk the boards *creepy laugh* |
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wooooooah.
that es goood
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that was a beutiful piece of poetry
your writing is amazing im blown away but what you have written god that would make edgar allen poe proud my name tiz currie or curreh or triple three or curtastrophe...whatever you prefer I've been adopted by Shanzy she is my protector togeter we make one whole 666 packege of evil so WAHPAH!!!!! i tiz in teh puhrade nao! ^_^ every time you can has god kills an lolcat  [br]Feed Me![br]Adopted from Valenth  [br]Feed Me![br]Adopted from Valenth  [br]Feed Me![br]Adopted from Valenth |
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Dude....
That was like.... awesome. Please, please continue! I would like that very much.
Bareback: where there is no room for interference    Feed Me! |
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MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEE
or gimme a marsh mellow i have adopted prettyodd333 (currie)- guesing shes half evil -she has been addopted by me! so dont mess with her, cuz i can be the worst thing you ever met *cough cough* iv also addopted PsychoChica! (marie) so i guese dat means all da loonys are like, getting together! so dont fuck with her! cuz im mre#entaly umstable and i be a bad mother (ask currie) i like my "kids" to expload... MWAHAHAHAHahahahahahaha  |
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doode this song goes perfectly with what you wrote
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KlvxrrUie9Q&feature=related my name tiz currie or curreh or triple three or curtastrophe...whatever you prefer I've been adopted by Shanzy she is my protector togeter we make one whole 666 packege of evil so WAHPAH!!!!! i tiz in teh puhrade nao! ^_^ every time you can has god kills an lolcat [br]Feed Me![br]Adopted from Valenth [br]Feed Me![br]Adopted from Valenth [br]Feed Me![br]Adopted from Valenth |
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who? i have adopted prettyodd333 (currie)- guesing shes half evil -she has been addopted by me! so dont mess with her, cuz i can be the worst thing you ever met *cough cough* iv also addopted PsychoChica! (marie) so i guese dat means all da loonys are like, getting together! so dont fuck with her! cuz im mre#entaly umstable and i be a bad mother (ask currie) i like my "kids" to expload... MWAHAHAHAHahahahahahaha |
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well that was jump little children they have not been discovered and i want them to be especially by panic which would be soooooo cool
my name tiz currie or curreh or triple three or curtastrophe...whatever you prefer I've been adopted by Shanzy she is my protector togeter we make one whole 666 packege of evil so WAHPAH!!!!! i tiz in teh puhrade nao! ^_^ every time you can has god kills an lolcat [br]Feed Me![br]Adopted from Valenth [br]Feed Me![br]Adopted from Valenth [br]Feed Me![br]Adopted from Valenth |
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bump
my name tiz currie or curreh or triple three or curtastrophe...whatever you prefer I've been adopted by Shanzy she is my protector togeter we make one whole 666 packege of evil so WAHPAH!!!!! i tiz in teh puhrade nao! ^_^ every time you can has god kills an lolcat [br]Feed Me![br]Adopted from Valenth [br]Feed Me![br]Adopted from Valenth [br]Feed Me![br]Adopted from Valenth |
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this is deep
-- im like a trash can holding all the information call me maggie! |
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this is amazing and i cant wait to figure out what happens so update you god of writing you!!!!
my name tiz currie or curreh or triple three or curtastrophe...whatever you prefer I've been adopted by Shanzy she is my protector togeter we make one whole 666 packege of evil so WAHPAH!!!!! i tiz in teh puhrade nao! ^_^ every time you can has god kills an lolcat [br]Feed Me![br]Adopted from Valenth [br]Feed Me![br]Adopted from Valenth [br]Feed Me![br]Adopted from Valenth |
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wow. you're comments made me blush and giggle. lol. thanks. lemme update. ____I know what you mean.__ I likea to (attempt)lurk the boards *creepy laugh* |
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yaaaaay!
If you need an extra character or something can i be one? (:
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ya. i needed one. so . . .what's your name. :] ____I know what you mean.__ I likea to (attempt)lurk the boards *creepy laugh* |
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wowzas cool i dont really want a part in this story i just kinda wanna sit back and see what happens cuz that first chapter just wow you blew my fucking mind
my name tiz currie or curreh or triple three or curtastrophe...whatever you prefer I've been adopted by Shanzy she is my protector togeter we make one whole 666 packege of evil so WAHPAH!!!!! i tiz in teh puhrade nao! ^_^ every time you can has god kills an lolcat [br]Feed Me![br]Adopted from Valenth [br]Feed Me![br]Adopted from Valenth [br]Feed Me![br]Adopted from Valenth |
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