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Here I lie in the bathtub in the process of dying and death.
I can’t speak and I can’t breathe.
But luckily I was never much of a talker.
It’s really a beautiful thing, death . . . well maybe it’s the way my blood floods the porcelain.
How it looks like butterfly wings. Forever spreading as the blood forever flows out my wounds.
There he lies. Just where the bullet pushed him to fall..
Blood darkens his hair as it pours out of his head.
He moans in pathetic pain. Blood dribbles/skis down his nose and rest upon his lips.
His hand twitches and he begins to curl into his body.
Involuntary of course.
Everything in the process of dying is involuntary.
He shakes violently, violently out of control.
After this dance he stills.
Everything from his face, my face, the window to the wall . . . is covered with blood now.
Splattered with dots that would make Monet proud.
He sleepily gazes over to me.
He can’t speak and his breathing is getting heavier as he tries harder to keep alive.
But his brown eyes say all that he never said.
I have about a ounce of energy left . . . i dip my fingertips in my blood and I manage to write “?” before everything fades to black.



(so. . .do you like it?. Its a story that's gonna be going backwards. to lead up to this.)

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wooooooah.
that es goood


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"Jon's in the back with Meredith." Gabe did a pelvic thrust and laughed.

 
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that was a beutiful piece of poetry

your writing is amazing

im blown away but what you have written

god that would make edgar allen poe proud


my name tiz currie or curreh or triple three or curtastrophe...whatever you prefer


I've been adopted by Shanzy she is my protector togeter we make one whole 666 packege of evil so WAHPAH!!!!!

i tiz in teh puhrade nao! ^_^

every time you can has god kills an lolcat

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Dude....
That was like.... awesome.
Please, please continue!
I would like that very much.


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MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEE
or gimme a marsh mellow


i have adopted prettyodd333 (currie)- guesing shes half evil -she has been addopted by me! so dont mess with her, cuz i can be the worst thing you ever met
*cough cough*

iv also addopted PsychoChica! (marie) so i guese dat means all da loonys are like, getting together! so dont fuck with her! cuz im mre#entaly umstable and i be a bad mother (ask currie) i like my "kids" to expload...
MWAHAHAHAHahahahahahaha
 
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doode this song goes perfectly with what you wrote

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KlvxrrUie9Q&feature=related


my name tiz currie or curreh or triple three or curtastrophe...whatever you prefer


I've been adopted by Shanzy she is my protector togeter we make one whole 666 packege of evil so WAHPAH!!!!!

i tiz in teh puhrade nao! ^_^

every time you can has god kills an lolcat

[br]Feed Me![br]Adopted from Valenth [br]Feed Me![br]Adopted from Valenth [br]Feed Me![br]Adopted from Valenth
 
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Originally posted by prettyodd333:
doode this song goes perfectly with what you wrote

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KlvxrrUie9Q&feature=related

who?


i have adopted prettyodd333 (currie)- guesing shes half evil -she has been addopted by me! so dont mess with her, cuz i can be the worst thing you ever met
*cough cough*

iv also addopted PsychoChica! (marie) so i guese dat means all da loonys are like, getting together! so dont fuck with her! cuz im mre#entaly umstable and i be a bad mother (ask currie) i like my "kids" to expload...
MWAHAHAHAHahahahahahaha
 
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well that was jump little children they have not been discovered and i want them to be especially by panic which would be soooooo cool


my name tiz currie or curreh or triple three or curtastrophe...whatever you prefer


I've been adopted by Shanzy she is my protector togeter we make one whole 666 packege of evil so WAHPAH!!!!!

i tiz in teh puhrade nao! ^_^

every time you can has god kills an lolcat

[br]Feed Me![br]Adopted from Valenth [br]Feed Me![br]Adopted from Valenth [br]Feed Me![br]Adopted from Valenth
 
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bump


my name tiz currie or curreh or triple three or curtastrophe...whatever you prefer


I've been adopted by Shanzy she is my protector togeter we make one whole 666 packege of evil so WAHPAH!!!!!

i tiz in teh puhrade nao! ^_^

every time you can has god kills an lolcat

[br]Feed Me![br]Adopted from Valenth [br]Feed Me![br]Adopted from Valenth [br]Feed Me![br]Adopted from Valenth
 
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this is deep


--
im like a trash can holding all the information

call me maggie!
 
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this is amazing and i cant wait to figure out what happens so update you god of writing you!!!!


my name tiz currie or curreh or triple three or curtastrophe...whatever you prefer


I've been adopted by Shanzy she is my protector togeter we make one whole 666 packege of evil so WAHPAH!!!!!

i tiz in teh puhrade nao! ^_^

every time you can has god kills an lolcat

[br]Feed Me![br]Adopted from Valenth [br]Feed Me![br]Adopted from Valenth [br]Feed Me![br]Adopted from Valenth
 
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Originally posted by prettyodd333:
this is amazing and i cant wait to figure out what happens so update you god of writing you!!!!


wow. you're comments made me blush and giggle. lol.
thanks.
lemme update.


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yaaaaay!
If you need an extra character or something can i be one?
(:


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Originally posted by BdenIsLuv:
yaaaaay!
If you need an extra character or something can i be one?
(:


ya. i needed one.
so . . .what's your name. :]


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wowzas cool i dont really want a part in this story i just kinda wanna sit back and see what happens cuz that first chapter just wow you blew my fucking mind


my name tiz currie or curreh or triple three or curtastrophe...whatever you prefer


I've been adopted by Shanzy she is my protector togeter we make one whole 666 packege of evil so WAHPAH!!!!!

i tiz in teh puhrade nao! ^_^

every time you can has god kills an lolcat

[br]Feed Me![br]Adopted from Valenth [br]Feed Me![br]Adopted from Valenth [br]Feed Me![br]Adopted from Valenth
 
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