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I wanted to try to make one of these, tell me how it is!!
Prologe: I was honestly the most pissed I have ever been at my mom. How could she do this to me? Do what? you want to know. Well, here is how it began. My mom and her best friend Karen did everything together. They lived down the road from each other when they got married and even got pregnant around the same time. Weird. I know. They planned on their kids to be best friends like them. Karen had a boy, in April, my mom had me in May. Karen named her son Brendon and me, well, I'm Teresa. Me and Brendon did EVERYTHING together. We played together even as toddlers. I would play with his trucks with him and (embarresing enough) he would play with me and my Barbies. We never hung out with other kids. We only hung out together. But that was okay with us. Middle school hit and still we only hung out with each other. But I started realizing that I felt...different about him. I didn't understand the feeling so I didnt say anything. In 8th grade Brendon told me he wanted to be a rockstar. I laughed. Brendon a rockstar? My Brendon? I wanted to be in the movies. He laughed at me. Everyday seemed to get weirder with Brendon. I got butterflys in my stomach whenever I saw him. Even if he wasnt wonderful looking with his pimples and dorky glasses. Once high school hit, I knew. I loved my best friend. Ugh. Why? I couldnt hold it in any longer. One day at the movies I turned towards him. He just gave me a strange look. "Brendon... I...uh...oh god...I think I love you." I smiled nervously and I got the reaction that has haunted me for years. His face grew serious or angry, I couldnt tell. "You can't!!" He yelled and ran out of the theater. I sat there and cried. People thought I was just a dumb freshman whose crush hurt her. No. My BEST and ONLY friend did. I called him for days but he never picked up or he was "out". I saw him in school with his "new" friends. He wouldnt even look at me in the hall. I started to hang out with a new girl Saraha and I tried to forget about Brendon. A year went by like this. One night my mom was really upset. She told me that Karen and Brendon were moving to Las Vegas because his dad got a promotion. I was kind of relieved. Now I wouldnt have to face him. I was in 10th grade and could enjoy my lasting high school years. Now I am 18 years old. I haven't really thought about HIM as I like to refer to Brendon now. I have a great boyfriend now and Brendon is a thing of the past. But my mother just told me that Brendon and Karen were staying a week for Christmas. That is why I am royally pissed. The door bell rang. I didnt even bother to get ready like my mother insisted. I had my hair in a messy bun and wore sweats and a sweatshirt. I opened the door and looked up at the incrediably handsome boy in front of me. "Hello Teresa". HE said. |
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keep going! and Welcome to the boards. :]
____I know what you mean.__ I likea to (attempt)lurk the boards *creepy laugh* |
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ooh, i like this.
continue...! ****************************** if olive oil is made from olives...then what is baby oil made from? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ oh snap...i have a fanfic? what? how to win a game with no prize? really... |
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ooohh this is good f'real!
update. and yes welcome to the boards =] _______________________________ Let's dream about tomorrow. |
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eep i like it
~March 5th 2008 the worst day ever!~ ****If me and Sisky's relationship had be be discribed as a music genre we would be post-pizzacore... If me and Alex Gaskarth's relation ship was a music genre it would be Post-Jager-kinky-core.....I know who's bed i'm waking up in**** forevers sisky's little ninja myspace ? OMGZ MIBBA? Hearts and guns:my blogspot |
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Thanks for all the comments!!!!!!! Keep them coming!!
Chapter One I just stared at him. He was tall now. His black hair was nicely cut and looked fluffy. I just wanted to touch it. His brown eyes looked gorgeous without his dorky glasses. His lips seemed fuller if that was even possible. He even wore a little eyeliner. And I could not resist a man in eyeliner. I looked down at myself. He probably thought I looked horrible. Whatever. "Uh Teresa? Helloooo?" He laughed as he waved a hand in front of my face, still out side the door. "Oh sorry. Hey Brendon, Karen." I hugged Karen first and then Brendon. My heart beat faster. But how? After what he did to me. How? "Oh Teresa, look at you! You are gorgeous! Oh how three years can change a person!!!" Karen said while hugging me again. "Yeah.. I know." I smiled weakly and looked up again at Brendon who was now hugging my mom. "Oh Brendon! You are so handsome. What have you been doing with your life, any idea about a future career?" My mom said gripping his arms, tears welling up in her eyes. "Well, I am in a band, Panic! at the Disco, with my three other friends. We actually just got signed!!" He said with a huge grin on his face. He glanced over at me. Well, I wasn't going to show him gratification. But he was a rockstar? My Brendon, a rockstar? Like he always wanted. And I laughed at him years ago. I kept back my tears while Karen turned to me, "So Teresa.. and you?? What are your career goals??" "I, well, I am going to probably go to college to be a lawyer." Brendon squinted his eyes, like he just ate a lemon. "A lawyer? What about being in the movies?" He asked, looking confused. How did he remember? I started to get angry. How can he pretend to care? He obviously didn't care when I told him I LOVED him. "Yeah well things change over time." I glared at him. I really did want to be an actress but my parents insisted that that was a dumb idea and being in the movies was a tough job to get into. "Well, I'm going to change and I think me and Sarah are going to go out later. We made plans a while ago, we are going to go to the iceskating rink." I smiled. My mom turned to me, "Well, can Brendon come with you?" "No. Sorry, its just a best friends type of day today." I smiled slyly and walked away. Brendon looked hurt. Good HE deserved it. I took a shower, and straightened my long brown hair. Brendon hasn't seen me since my hair was shorter than my shoulders. I also lost weight. I put on my skinny pants to show off my newly skinny legs and body. I also put on a tight black shirt and put on my eyeliner and blush. I had to say I looked good. I usually didn't try this hard, but I wanted to show Brendon what he missed out on. Maybe he didn't love me back because of what I looked like? No. I loved him and looked what HE looked like. I smiled to myself as I remembered the old dorky Brendon. I walked out of my room with my jacket and bag in one hand. Brendon and Karen and my mom were at the kitchen table with coffee mugs talking. Once I came into the kitchen Brendon's eyes grew wide. Karen smiled and his face. "Mom, I won't be home late. Love you" I said as I kissed her cheeck, then kissed Karen's. I tapped Brendon on the shoulder. "Bye Bren" I smiled my best smile and walked out the door. I stood outside with my back against the cool door and slid down so I was sitting on the 'Welcome' mat. I put my head in my hands. What was I doing? Everytime I looked at him I got that feeling in my stomach. I can't feel like this anymore. After what he did. I had a BOYFRIEND. I held back the tears and stood up. Sarah was probably waiting. As I went over to open my car door, I heard the front door shut. "Wait up T!!" Brendon yelled. He was the only person to ever call me T. What did HE want? Couldn't he just leave me alone? |
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ahhh post more more more!!!
=] _______________________________ Let's dream about tomorrow. |
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this is really good! update soon? :]
oh, and welcome to the boards. =] --&-- tripping eyes & flooded lungs, northern downpour sends its love |
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uhoh i'm seeing a scandel comming...or at least i'm hoping for a scandel
soo good ~March 5th 2008 the worst day ever!~ ****If me and Sisky's relationship had be be discribed as a music genre we would be post-pizzacore... If me and Alex Gaskarth's relation ship was a music genre it would be Post-Jager-kinky-core.....I know who's bed i'm waking up in**** forevers sisky's little ninja myspace ? OMGZ MIBBA? Hearts and guns:my blogspot |
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Wow this seems really good! Please keep going.
****************************** Be good, if you can't be good, be safe, if you can't be safe... well, don't name it after me! |
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Thanks again for all the comments!!!
Chapter Two: Brendon ran towards me at full speed."Listen, first off, wow you look beautiful." I blushed as he said this. "We need to talk." "What? You want to talk to me NOW? NOW after three years. What would you want?" I asked, my face getting hot. He grabbed my arm. "About that.. I-" "You WHAT? You know what I don't really care. I lasted THREE YEARS without you. You were my one friend and I LOVED you. Ha..my mistake." I turned to open the car. He put his body in front of mine so I couldn't open the car door. There were those butterflies again. "I want to start over. Please. I know I was wrong and eventually I'll tell you why.But please, just lets talk. I really did miss you." He begged. "Yeah I bet" I mumbled. "What?" He asked confused. "Nothing. Do you, like, want to come iceskating with me and my best friend who has never ignored me and left me." I glared at him and he rolled his eyes and smiled."So you will NEVER forget or let me forget about what happened, huh?" He smiled and I melted. "Noped. And anyway I mean, I think it is more torture to sit with Karen and my mom who will be reminsing." I laughed in spite of myself. "Thanks. I'll come." He smiled and walked to the passengers seat. The car ride was silent for about 20 minutes and it took about an hour to get to the rink. Brendon decided to put on the radio and 'I'm not going to write you a love song' came on. He went to switch it but I smacked his hand. "Leave.It." Brendon just stared. "Okayyyyyy" "So, anyway, how is your band. I'm glad you are having you dream come true." I smiled fakely. He turned to face me. "WHY are you becoming a LAWYER. I thought you wanted to 'be in the movies'." "Yeah well like I said things change." "Dreams don't change Teresa, especially yours. You always wanted to be in the movies and act with Brad Pitt, and Orlandooooo" "Yeah well, it was a dumb idea." We stopped at a red light. Brendon turned his body to face me. "It was NOT a dumb idea, T! You would make a GREAT actress!" I blushed. "But anyway," He continued, "What's new and exciting with you?" "I have a boyfriend of a year." I smiled. "Thats great!! Whats his name?" Brendon asked a little less excited then when we first started talking. "His name is Dustin." Brendon laughed. "Sorry but DUSTIN? Come on." He snicked. "Okay so how about YOUR love life?" I asked. He suddenly got uncomfortable. "Well I never got over my first love...so I never thought about going out with anyone else." He shrugged and wiggled uncomfortably in his seat. |
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awwwww...eeew dustin?
~March 5th 2008 the worst day ever!~ ****If me and Sisky's relationship had be be discribed as a music genre we would be post-pizzacore... If me and Alex Gaskarth's relation ship was a music genre it would be Post-Jager-kinky-core.....I know who's bed i'm waking up in**** forevers sisky's little ninja myspace ? OMGZ MIBBA? Hearts and guns:my blogspot |
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continue pweeze ^___^
~*~*~*~*~*~*~ RETURN OF THE JOH~ BEEWAIR "I'm taking it off, Baby!"-Kerry Me: Dude, I've had so many carbs today it's insane. Lydia: Like what? Oh! I know! Rice, rice and more rice, you filthy Asian! ....Omg don't hurt me. CGI: Contemporary Global Issues Come Get Intoxicated Christina Got Igloos Cat G's INSANE~ [we all know she is] Cat Gives Infections Cat Grinds Icicles {Jack-flavored if you were wondering ;o} [by ChristinaAtTheTRENCH] Consume Grace's intestines [by Pretty Odd] Come Get Intelligence [by Pretty Odd] Colonas Going Incest [by Faith Fright] Creepy Ghost Infants [by The Purple Thingamabob] Confusing Green Images [by The Purple Thingamabob] Corroded Gargantuan Igloos [by Crazy Sparkle Monster] Capricorn's Gills Institution [by Crazy Sparkle Monster] Carnivorous Gnome Infestation [by Crazy Sparkle Monster] Complex geometric integrity [by michelle melody™] [tell me if you have another one e.e] |
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this is rad.
please continue "It's better to burn out than to fade away." |
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