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First chapter but short. Hope you like it.


Chapter 1:

My short blonde hair was whipping on my face, as the cold air blew. I shiver. I saw a puddle and saw how horrid I looked. I just remember my boyfriend breaking up with me. Then running from the dirthole school to well here! I just hated the stress. So, I lay on the ground in the middle of the street. I still had my eyes closed when all of a sudden I heard a car....no a bus make a 'PSSHH' sound then there were footsteps. Then this voice that sound so familiar said "Are you dead?' Then I replied "No, not yet."


tell me if you liked it.
Big Grin
 
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oh my god!
i love this!

can i possibly be in it?
I'm Meredith btw


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"Jon's in the back with Meredith." Gabe did a pelvic thrust and laughed.

 
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OMG this was awesome i loved it,

oh and maybe i could be in it aswell?
thankyouu


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Formerly i_had_the_world
I AM A VEGETARIAN.
Fall Out Boy+Hey Monday +All American Rejects 18-02-09
KENDRA + I ARE LEGEND SISTAHHHS XD
MAHHSPACE
LIVE JOURNAL!
fall out boy-18-02-09
You should definitely read these fics;
Kendra + my unf-a-licious fic
Kendra's + Maggies awesome fic
Lyn's + Kendra's legendness fic
Lyn's fantabulous fic
Another one of Lyn's fantabulous fics
 
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ohhhh I loves it!


Hi I'm Kelly! I'm obsessed with Peacocks. I live in CANADA and we ROCK!!
I.
Love.
Jon.
Walker.
You now he wins at life.
I've been adopted by MAGGIE(Crazy Sparkle Monster)so HA.
 
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AHHH!

thats awesome!!!!!!!!!

update soon!!!!



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This is awesome so far! Big Grin
Can I be in it please? With Bren or Ryan?
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I have adopted Sophie (sophaloaf). Mess with her - feel my wrath.
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When all hope is lost, just PANIC!
 
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I have Bren and my sis has Ryan so you van have spencer, but whatas your name. I will put you in on the third chapter. And how do I update my profile???


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Shaelyn.
Nothing to hear.
Nothing to say.


 
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Chapter 2:

"So why are you on the ground?" said the familiar voice I replied "It's a long story."

I had yet found the strength to open my eyes. "So can you get up?" I awnsered "If you help me." Then that was when I opened my eyes and saw his gorgeous face! It was Brendon Urie of Panic At The Disco. He was smiling and it made my heart melt, but I had to keep it all and seem like a non-spazzing fangirl. Then Brendon said "How about that story?" I replied "Well I guess."

"How about we get inside." Brendon said.

"Umm, where." I said.

"In the bus." Brendon said. "I want you to meet the band."



HOLY SHIZZ!I get to meet them! I thought.

"Well here we are." Brendon said.

Ryan was sitting there bored out of his mind and flipping his sidkick screen. Jon was sitting with Spencer talking. Then this booming voice came out "Who do we have here!" It was Zac. I almost peed my pants when I heard his voice.

Then all the boys looked up and in sync they all said "Hello!"

Brendon sat down and motioned me to sit a couple inches away from his apple-bottom. I sat.

Then I said "well hello to all." Jon laughed then said "That's one I haven't heard before." I giggled. Then Brendon asked "What's your name."

"Shaelyn" I said. " People mostly call me Shae though."

Ryan chimed in "I like Shaelyn better it's unique."

"Thank you." I blushed.

I noticed that Brendon had been staring at me the whole time. WOW!

"Well do you know any songs of ours? You know Panic At The Disco." Ryan asked.

"Yeah. Actually all of them. They are very unique and beautiful. So two thimbs up." I giggled.

"Why, thank you Shaelyn."

So now Brendon was excited so he asked " Why were you laying in the middle of the street exactly."

I sighed "Well, it all started when I was in biology and my boyfriend walked and ignored me for 15 miutes of the class. Then he walked up to me and said 'I think it's over' so I ran out of the class and when I was half a way from the school and I started walking. That was when I said 'Fuck It' and layed down and closed my eyes, and when I saw a puddle I had seen how awful I looked." "So there you go."

Then to my amazment I saw Brendon holding my hand. Then he said sweetly "I thinkyour beautiful."


~♥~
Shaelyn.
Nothing to hear.
Nothing to say.


 
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Big Grin Yay!
My names Kiara (Brennan)
And incase you need a description, here goes....

I've got like, bleach blonde hair, It's shoulder length, really layered. I have a really thick side fringe, people call it emo hair. The tips of my hair are hot pink Smiler I'm slim, and I live in brightly coloured skinny jeans, band shirts and converse. Ummm... I'm totally non comformist, I'm original and I guess I stand out from the crowd. I'm different Smiler I'm not shy at all, but I'm not super hyper and annoying, I just don't try and hide who I am. I'm thoughtful and intelligent.

LMAO that was a freaking essay!
Thanks!


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I have adopted Sophie (sophaloaf). Mess with her - feel my wrath.
Oh yeah Big Grin
When all hope is lost, just PANIC!
 
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Chapter 3:

WOW! I couldn't believe he had said that.

All of a sudden I interrupted the big long silence. I said "So would you like to meet some people."

"Sure." Brendon said.

"Well here we are my house." I said. I walked up rang the dorbell and then the door opend out came my sister Sydnee and my friend Kiara she definitley stands out with her layered blonde hair with pink tips and some lime green skinny jeans, and last but not least my dog a short black and white, french bulldog.

"Wow! A whole pack!" Brendon said.

I could tell Kiara was excited , and Spencer couldn't take his eyes off of her and also my sister was being stared at by Ryan with his big brown eyes. So adorable.

I chimed in "SO you wanna go inside. Just make yourselves comfortable."

"This is a vintage home you got here, I like it." Brendon stated.

"Why, thank you."

Brendon had pulled me aside and whispered to me
"Can we go somewhere else in your house."

"Sure, my room." I whispered back.

The rest of the boys were busy Ryan and Sydnee were chatting it up, so was Spencer and Kiara.

So we tip-toed upstairs.

We finally reach my lime- green romm. and entered.

"I need to tell you something." Brendon said.

"What is it Brendon?"

"Well I kinda- sorta think I'm in love with you." He was blushing.

I giggled "I think I do too."

Then at that moment he pulled me in for a sweet, romantic kiss.


~♥~
Shaelyn.
Nothing to hear.
Nothing to say.


 
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Did you guys like it?


~♥~
Shaelyn.
Nothing to hear.
Nothing to say.


 
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Kiara you have to put me in one of your stories with one of the boys!


~♥~
Shaelyn.
Nothing to hear.
Nothing to say.


 
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Me to me toSmiler



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YAAAAAAAAAAAYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Big GrinBig GrinBig GrinBig GrinBig Grin
I saw my name! Big Grin
And I'm totally hitting it off with Spencer !
LOL

Yeah definitely! I've got one going at the moment

http://boards.fueledbyramen.com/artists/panicatthedisco...68/m/52910329811/p/1

but all the panic boys are taken, you could have William Beckett?
But I'm working on another one too, and you can have one of the Panic guys in that!
Brendon's taken though!
I'll let you know when it's up Big Grin

Ps. THANKYOU!


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Oh yeah Big Grin
When all hope is lost, just PANIC!
 
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Here is a description! I have blonde hair layered and always straightend and short. I am taller thank a few people in my grade I am 5'6". I have blue eyes that are the best feature on me. And people say I have a cute smile. When I get cold my nose turns really red. I wear brightly colored shirts. Skinny jeans. And my black converses. I am not shy. I love hugs. I am very ticklish. I love to live. I love Panic At The Disco.

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~♥~
Shaelyn.
Nothing to hear.
Nothing to say.


 
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