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In the middle of summer, two girls were giggling excitedly at Ryan Ross's Hotel room door. They were maids at the hotel, and their boss had given them the job of cleaning Ryan's room. " I CAN'T believe we're going into his room!" squealed a young blond, opening the door. " You can't believe anything, Alice," retorted the redhead, and stepped inside. " Can you turn on the li-OW! That's my foot, Katia!" Whispered Alice, and pinched "Katia". " OWWW " yelled a male voice. Alice went very pale as the light went on, and turned to see who she had pinched. "What are you doing in my room?" asked the man, who- Katia gasped -was Ryan Ross. "We-we-we're th-the m-m-maids, s-s-sir!" Squeaked Alice. "I th-thought y-you w-w-were m-my f-f-friend, s-s-sir!" Suddenly, Ryan shrugged and smiled. " I'll leave you to it, then- on ONE condition," he said, looking at the two girls. "What's that?" asked Katia. "Please don't make a habit of pinching me and my friends!" he said, and he and Katia laughed, but a mortified Alice nodded, and quietly pulled out a duster. " Should I leave " he asked. "You can stay!" said the girls at once. " Okay." he said, and lay down on his bed. The girls cleaned quickly, and when they were done, they turned to leave, when a Ryan said," Wait!". They spun around, and listened. " Here's a tip!" and handed then each a five dollar bill. "Thank you!" they said together, and raced out of the room. The girls looked at each other, and screamed. A security guard came booming down the hall. "You'll have to come with me" he said in a deep, gruff voice. He grabbed them, and led them down the hall. Nobody noticed Ryan Ross following them. Not one person.


Katia's POV.

The man led us to a room, and sat us down.
"Now, what we-" he began, but was cut off by Alice. "What did we do?" she demanded, and glared at him. " Be quiet! " he snapped, and began to talk. " We have alarm's set in that room, young ladies, for girls like you."
"And What kind of-" I began, but received a slap on the face.
"I told you to be quiet!" he snapped, and continued. " Fangirls, that's what you are!" he yelled, and we covered our ears. " Now tell me this, and there will not be any trouble. WHAT DID YOU TAKE!" he boomed, and shook the furniture. "Nothing, sir!" we said at the same time, both afraid. My cheek still throbbed with pain, and I bit my lip to stop from crying in pain as he slapped us both. " I am afraid this is not clear to you. "
he said, and leaned in. " WHAT. DID.YOU.TAKE??" he roared, and glared at us. It looked like he was staring into our souls. We would never get out.


Ryan's POV

I don't know why I followed them, really. I guess I like them- not romantically, friendly! I took a deep breath, and made myself visible. "They're with me." I said, and the guard turned his attention to me, and nodded. I let out my breath, which I had been holding, and helped the girls up. As we walked out, the guard called after us. " You got lucky, girls!" and slammed the door. We escaped.


Alice's POV

Ryan took us to his room, said a kind of password, and led us inside. "sit!" he invited, beckoning at a comfy looking couch. We sat right away, and I spoke.

"Thank-you, Mr.George Ryan Ross the third!" I said, smiling. Ryan smiled. "Anytime!" he said, and added "and call me Ryan. Not my full name." We nodded, and Katia spoke. " So.... are we f-friends?" she said slowly, as if wanting his approval, and he nodded. "Yes!" I muttered, and apparently he heard, because he laughed. "You remind me of Brendon!" he said and asked" What did you say you're names were?"
I opened my mouth to speak, but Katia spoke first.
"We didn't. I'm Katia, and this is Alice. We're twins."
"Well, you know who I am, I shall presume," he said, and we nodded.
"Yes-Ryan" I said. Ryan I thought. His name sounded so perfect! I was in deep thought, when Brendon burst through the door. " Hey Ry, gues-" He broke off, seeing us. "And who," he said, scanning us, "may I ask are you?"


Sorry, first fanfic, I know it sucks.

Question:
Do you want me to continue this?

Choices:
Yes
No
YESSSSS
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
I don't care

 

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I'm going to post chapter 2 anyway, you know

I picked 'YESSSSS' xDDD

It's very, very good. :]

Thanks!!!!!

It's my very first fanfic!

You're welcome!

It's veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy great, especially with it being your very first fic!

...So you're updating?

Chapter 2:

Brendan's POV



I stood, looking at the strangers.

"Oh, Hi Bren, this is Alice and Katia" Ryan said, pointing at the girls, " They were my maids, and oh, long story!"

I smiled, and sat down next to the cute redhead Katia. "I've got time!" I said. " All day...All week...All YEAR, so BEGIN! " I said, and pretended to wave a magic wand.

But, Ryan wasn't listening. He was in another world, one only he knew about. He was staring straight at Alice, who stared right back at him. Katia giggled. "True,true love!" she laughed, but her laugh was cut short when Ryan fainted, followed by Alice.
"ALICE! RYAN!" I screamed, and I realized Katia was crying as we ran to help them. "Call 911." She hissed, and I whipped out my phone and speed-dialed the hospital. The last thing I remember was a thunderous BOOM,extreme heat, and all was dark.


Ryan's POV:

I woke up. A flood of questions filled my head. Where was I? Where is Alice? Where are Brendon and Katia? The last thing I remembered was staring at Alice, The cutest, bestest, coolest girl IN THE UNIVERSE, when all the sudden, everything went black.
"Back to the living now Ry?"
A female voice called. Katia!
"What happened?" I asked, craning my neck to look at her. She was in abed beside me, and we were obviously in a hospital. "Well, you were all in dreamworld, and then you and Alice fainted, and, well, the building exploded." Katia said. I stared at her, and my jaw fell. The building EXPLODED?

quote:

It's veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy great, especially with it being your very first fic!

Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!

=o

MY JAW JUST DROPPED.

NOT RYAN.

NOT KATIA.

NO.

;-;

Don't worry! I WAS debating to make one of them blind, but I cancelled that out. Katia WILL have a wheelchair, though. Or maybe Ryan...

Brendon's POV:

The doctors said it was an explosion. They said I was in the building. I was with my friends. I don't remember at all.


Katia's POV:

"Ry?" I called, "You with me, buddy?"
Ryan nodded, and snapped back to life.
"Who is hurt?" He asked. I gulped.
"Well, You broke 4 ribs, and suffered a concusion, along with some scratches and bruises, About the same for Alice, but she has an infected wound on her chest, and Brendon, well, When he woke up I was asleep, and the doctors told me it was pretty serious, but nothing else."

"And you?"

I gulped again. " I suffered the second worst, next to Brendon." I told Ryan, who was staring at me. " I lost both legs."

Was that evil of me?

Don't worry, Brendon WILL remember............



EVENTUALLY

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Shall I update? Or shall I make you suffer in worry for the four?

Any names for it?

NEXT CHAPTER

Alice's POV

When I woke up, I felt a great pain in my side. My wound was unbearable. I looked around. Was Ryan awake yet? HE WAS! "Ryan!" I screamed. Wait- so was Katia! "Katia!!!" I yelled, and both turned to look at me. "Awwwww Miss your dear Ryan in your dreams?" Katia taunted. She had caught me staring at Ryan. Great. I nodded sheepishly, and Ryan turned as red as a tomato. He mumbled somthing that sounded like "Mfye fluo". "What was that, Ry?" Katia asked. "ME TOO!" He yelled, and Brendon woke up. " And who are you?" He asked. He had no memory.

Brendon's POV:

Who are they? They woke me up. Are they these "friends" the doctors talk about? I have no idea. I don't even know my own name.

Katia's POV:

Brendon had no memory. I couldn't believe it. Not one memory. He asked us a whole bunch of questions about himself, but he doesn't believe us, I think.

I get my wheelchair tonight. Then I am outta here tomorrow! Alone... They say Ryan gets out on Friday. It's Wednesday. Alice has 2 more weeks or so, and Brendon... I don't know. For all we know, It could be forever.

A week later:

Still Katia's POV

We're out! Brendon is Remembering his band ONLY, but not who's in it, but ahh,well. Progress is progress!

Ryan and I are in a cheap apartment with some cheap furniture. We'll need our money, so we didn't spoil ourselves.

"So let me get this straight- My name is Brendon Urie, and You guys are in my band, Panic at the Disco?" Brendon asked. I stifled a giggle. This was the information that he'd been studying for a week, and now he was talking to Jon, Spencer and Ryan. "That's right!" They all replied. Brendon looked pleased with himself. "I'll leave you to your chatting, then!" I said, and danced out of the room. I had started to fall in love-
With Brendon. I had liked him before, romantically, and now it was love. Ryan had asked Alice out on a date, which was accepted, and as soon as she was out of the hospital, they would be together. Life was turning out to be great!