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SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
TO THE SUN ONLY RISES ON THE EIGHTH DAY OF THE WEEK!!!!
ALL THE GUYS ARE TAKEN AND I DON'T HAVE ANY MORE ROOM FOR PPL IN THE STORY I'M SORRY =(
IF U HAVEN'T READ THE FIRST ONE, YOU JUST MIGHT WANT TO....
ALRIGHTO!!! UH...YEAH NOT MUCH ELSE!! PEACE AND LOVE AND HOPEFULLY WE GET SOME NEW READERS??!!?!?!!?


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heyyyyyyyyyyyyy

i'm almost done with the first chapter!!!!


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here's the first chapter...but i don't think it's really good. it's going to take awhile to get this book started LIKE BAM!! like the other one. so....yeah. let me know how u like it!!!!
and i need descriptions from the ppl who are in this!!
[besides the ones i already have]

Chapter one- The New Horizons Look Bright


Part one-
“we are so going to take a picture by that later.” I announced to Brendon as we zoomed past the “Welcome to the fabulous Las Vegas, Nevada” sign. Brendon laughed. “Okay, that’s fine with me. But then we have to go pick up your books and stuff for school.” I groaned. Due to a sudden change in events, I was now moving to Las Vegas with my twenty-one-year old boyfriend, Brendon Urie. Sure it sounds normal and fun but I’m sixteen, which is a little disappointing because that means I have to go to school for seven hours instead of take in the wonderful looks of my boyfriend.
I sighed and Brendon kissed my hair. “Are you tired?” he asked. I nodded. “We’ll be home soon.” He said and pulled me closer to him. My eyes started closing and the bus came to a complete halt. My eyes popped open. “Here’s our stop.” Brendon said. Oh sure, he had to be the first stop. “Bye, Brendon! See you later!” the guys said. “Bye guys.” Brendon said. “Bye Mackenzie! We’ll see you later too!” I laughed. “Yes you will bye.” Brendon and I climbed off the bus and the bus driver and Brendon grabbed bags. I waited for them to get out of the way and I grabbed as much as I could. We did it all in one trip. “Bye Phil.” Brendon said to the bus driver. Phil nodded and walked back to the bus. We watched the bus speed away and then Brendon and I faced our new house. I had both hands on my hips as I checked the house out. It was a cute little thing; it had a long driveway with a garage in the back of it and a little pathway that led to a porch and a front door. The house was a little bit lighter than beige and it had a very attractive dark brown front door. “Ready to go inside?” he asked. “sure.” I agreed and we picked up as many suitcases and crap we could. We waddled to the front door and Brendon dropped everything and fished his keys out of his pocket. He unlocked the door and we walked in. “what should I do with these?” I asked. “Just drop them wherever you want.” He said. I dropped them a little to the left of the front door and stared at the house. “wow.” I said. It was a very nice little place. When you walked in there was a cream carpet and a big black leather couch that was a half circle around a giant plasma screen television on the wall. There were cords all over the floor from all the controls to the PS3 that was hooked up to the plasma screen. Then there was a black leather recliner on the left side of the couch. There was a big bay window with a little ledge. From the living room there was a step up and you were in the kitchen. There were all the necessities, oven, sink, dishwasher, refrigerator and a little table in front of another table with a fan over everything in the kitchen. Through the back of the kitchen there was a little room. There were shoes all over it and jackets thrown around. “I’m assuming that’s the mud room.” I said. Brendon laughed. “you assumed right.” I smiled at the messiness and then we went back to the living room and up the stairs. There was a balcony so you could see the doors. “Here’s the bathroom.” Brendon said as he opened a door and pointed. “That’s…a very clean bathroom.” I said. Brendon shrugged. “I have maids.”
“Seriously?”
“Yes, but they only come like… once a month or before I leave for a tour. I don’t like coming home to a messy house.”
“Me either.”
“Let’s see your room.”
“My room?”
“Well, you are living here aren’t you?”
“Yes but…”
“You thought we would share a bed?”
“It was stupid of me to think that wasn’t it?”
“No it wasn’t stupid at all! I just think…since your sixteen and stuff maybe you should just sleep alone. It doesn’t mean we can’t have ‘sleepovers’.” Brendon said putting air quotes around sleep over. I laughed. “We should have one tonight!”
“Or every night.”
“I like that idea!”
“Well, for the first week, but you start school on Tuesday.”
“Ugh, Brendon you sound like my mom! Oh frick! I have to call her.” I said and pulled my phone out of my pocket and dialed her number. “Hello?”
“Hey mom, it’s Mackenzie.”
“Hello, Mackenzie! Did you make it there alright?”
“Yes we did. Brendon is just giving me a tour of his house and then we are going to unpack and stuff.”
“Well, I’m glad you got there safely. I’ll let you go now.”
“Okay, bye mom.”
“Bye Mackenzie.”
“Love you.”
“Love you too.”
Then the line disconnected. I looked up at Brendon, and took in his features. His dark hair, dark eyes, his full lips and pale skin. He was examining his finger nails and was gnawing on his index finger nail when he turned to me. “What?” he asked. I stared at him and started laughing. “You’re too cute, Mr. Urie.”
“Thank you, Ms. Walters.”
“So are we going to unpack or what?”
“Don’t you want to see your room?”
“Sure?”
Brendon opened the door and inside was an elaborately painted room with flowers everywhere it looked Pretty. Odd. “This is an awesome room, Brendon! I can’t believe it…oh my god! It’s the Russian stack doll from That Green Gentlemen!” I yelled and petted the head of the stack doll. Brendon laughed. “that it is. I thought you might like some authentic Panic at the Disco gear for your room.”
“I already have some.”
“I know.”
“I’m not talking about the stack dolls, Brendon.”
“Then what….oh. Me?”
I nodded. “I’m not a permanent fixture.”
“You will be.”
“I can be your lamp.”
I laughed. “Can I see your room?”
“Sure.”
He grabbed my hand and led me out the door and over to the door right next to mine. He opened it and I was pretty shocked.
The room was gray with red and black accents. There were three guitars in there, all on stands, A closet with barely anything in it, two black nightstands on either side of the bed with two lamps, an alarm clock on one and a glass of water on the other. “your room is probably the second coolest room I’ve ever seen in my life!” I said. “Why? It’s just…a room.”
“But it’s all you, Brendon. It’s got your guitars, which are beautiful.”
“I’ve seen prettier things.”
“Like what? Look at them sparkle!”
“You.”
“Aw! Brendon you’re such a charmer. “I said and kissed him. But it wasn’t the light little peck I intended to give him and soon our tongues were dancing with each other and we were falling back. “Brendon…” I breathed. “What?” he whispered into my ear. I pulled him back to my lips and we kissed some more, and Brendon moved down to my neck making me moan a little. Then, we stopped. Brendon and I were breathing heavily. “You don’t know how long I’ve wanted to kiss you like that.” Brendon said. I laughed a little. “I know. I’m glad I got to come here with you, Brendon.”
“I’m glad you came here with me too.”
“Ready to unpack?” I asked him. He laughed. “Yes I am!”
We grabbed hands and trotted down to get our bags.


Part two-
There really was nothing better than having her here with me. She was a very nice addition to the home and there was nothing I would’ve asked for besides her company. She was sitting on my bed as I unpacked, her legs dangling off the side of my bed. She watched them and looked up to me. She seemed to just stare at me for a moment. I looked at her pale skin, her dark brown hair and her blue-green eyes. She looked so innocent, sitting there like an angel, my angel.
“Are you sure you don’t need any help?” she asked. “I’m positive, Mackenzie. You just need to sit tight and relax.”
“Sit tight I’m gonna need you to keep time come on just snap, snap, snap your fingers for me…” she sang. I laughed. “Thank you for that, Mackenzie. On second thought, why don’t you go put that laundry basket of stuff in the laundry room?”
“Where’s the laundry room?”
“It’s in the mud room but it’s under some stuff, you’ll see the dryer and washer don’t worry their hard to miss.”
“Alright, you be good. I’ll be back so soon you won’t even be able to miss me.” she stood up and grabbed the big white basket and left the room. I continued putting stuff away and when I was finished Mackenzie appeared at my door again. “What are we doing now?” she asked. “Well, we can eat. Are you hungry?”
“Yes!”
“Then let’s eat!”
I offered my arm for her and she took it. we walked happily downstairs and to the kitchen. I looked in my refrigerator to see what I had. It wasn’t much. “What are we eating?” she asked. “Well, I forgot that I pretty much emptied the house out before the tour.”
“That’s okay, we can just order a pizza or something.” she suggested.
“Okay, we can do that.” I said and walked to get the phone. I dialed the number and ordered the pizza. “it should be here in about thirty minutes.” I told her as I hung up the phone.
“When are we going to visit my school?” I asked.
“Whenever you would like.”
“I don’t want to wait for the first day. Do you think you could get me in there?”
“I went there, Mackenzie. I can help you.”
“I don’t even have my schedule yet.”
“We can go get that tomorrow.”
“What else can we do tomorrow? I want to get to know Vegas!”
“It’s pretty much gambling, sex and alcohol…and drugs.”
“Oh. But I still want to go around and see stuff.”
“We can do that. Plus, I have some errands to run.”
“Okay.”
There was a knock at the door about ten minutes later and the pizza guy was there. I handed him the money and in exchange he handed me the pizza. I then closed the door and set the pizza down on the table. Mackenzie stared at it like it was a golden necklace. “Hurry up and open the box!” she demanded. I laughed. “Calm down, Mackenzie. I just have to go get plates.”
She sighed and fell back in her seat. I placed a plate in front of her. She opened the box and plopped two pieces on her plate and started chewing the first one. “Do you want anything to drink?” I asked as I turned around to face her from the refrigerator.
“ruh…rhatever you ranna ret me.” she said with her mouth full. I laughed and pulled out two orange sodas from the refrigerator. I set them down and helped myself to the pizza. Mackenzie was already on her second piece. “You were hungry weren’t you?”
“Oh yes.” She said and took a bite. I chuckled as I started on my first piece.
After dinner we went to the living room and I fell on the couch. Mackenzie fell on top of me and rested her head on my chest. We stared off into space, watching nothing, and just thinking. “I’m tired.” She yawned. “Me too.” I yawned in response. “We should sleep.” She suggested and snuggled into me a little. “Don’t you want to at least go upstairs?” I asked. “No. I’m good.” she said. I shrugged and closed my eyes. I was asleep in a matter of moments.


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they call me Urie...'cause that's how i roll.


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jcmioejfa. i loved it. Big Grin

did yu read my comment in the other one?


Hey, I'm Esther, but you can call me strawberrybannanasmoothieatdunkindonuts XD

i've been adopted by LAURA (Muffyrules252)~ YAY!

CLICKY AND SAVE MEH DRAGONS FROM A TERRIBLE FATE<3


i should stop getting more. D:
 
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yes i did...the one about his little sister?!?!?

i'm not sure about that though....i'll let u know =)


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HAI.

rawrs.

really.

that would be nice if i was. Big Grin


Hey, I'm Esther, but you can call me strawberrybannanasmoothieatdunkindonuts XD

i've been adopted by LAURA (Muffyrules252)~ YAY!

CLICKY AND SAVE MEH DRAGONS FROM A TERRIBLE FATE<3


i should stop getting more. D:
 
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i can let u be one of her friends if u want


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they call me Urie...'cause that's how i roll.


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hmm. MAYBE. >.>

Big Grin

alright.

as long as i get to talk to teh panic boys. Big Grin


Hey, I'm Esther, but you can call me strawberrybannanasmoothieatdunkindonuts XD

i've been adopted by LAURA (Muffyrules252)~ YAY!

CLICKY AND SAVE MEH DRAGONS FROM A TERRIBLE FATE<3


i should stop getting more. D:
 
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OFG OMFG I ABSOLUTELY LOVED LOVED LOVED IT!!!!!
 
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am i in this?
i did ask in the other one...


i have adopted prettyodd333 (currie)- guesing shes half evil -she has been addopted by me! so dont mess with her, cuz i can be the worst thing you ever met
*cough cough*

iv also addopted PsychoChica! (marie) so i guese dat means all da loonys are like, getting together! so dont fuck with her! cuz im mre#entaly umstable and i be a bad mother (ask currie) i like my "kids" to expload...
MWAHAHAHAHahahahahahaha
 
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ahhh! write//post more!!
this is amazing


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October 23 was the best day of my life!!!
 
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YA DO IT DO IT DO IT!
 
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JEEZE!!!
i heart my readers!!!! sorry, just thought i'd let u guys know that i heart u!!!!

i need a description if u are gonna be in this or not.
i answered some of those 'can i be in its' in the first one and descriptions will be done via PM 'cause u know.... that's what i wanna do.

PLEASE DON'T ASK ME TO BE IN THIS ANYMORE!!!

i'm writing other ones too and i could prolly squeeze u in somewhere

and strawberrybannanasmoothieatdunkindonuts u do get to talk to the panic boys!!! so u get to be one of her friends mmkay?!?!?


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